Last Wednesday at Sue’s Place – Part 3

Moments later . . .

“Hey BOB-BAY!!”

Bobby turns. “Fuck.”

“I said HEY BOB-BAY!!”

“What’s up Earl?”

“Aww, you know, same old shit.”

“So how have you been?” Bobby asks but really doesn’t care.

“Can’t complain.”

“Haven’t seen you in a while.”

“Damn man, that is a long mother fuckin’ story. But hey, I got a new truck!”

“Oh yeah?”

“Fuck yeah, look out in the parking lot.”

Bobby turns half ass toward the window, not really looking out.

“Yeah Earl, that’s real nice.”

“Paid cash for it my man.”

“Good on you man, good on you. Payments are a bitch.”

“You’re tellin’ me. Say . . . can you spot me a twenty?”

“What?” Bobby asks.

“Come on man, I’m good for it.”

“You still owe me ten from the dice game you cheap bastard.”

“Yeah, I was going to talk to you about that-”

“Never mind. Here, I’ll give you fifteen.”

“That’s damn kind of you boy but twenty sure would be better.”

“What the fuck? Fine, here, here’s twenty bucks. I gotta get going.”

“What? It’s still early. Stick around, I’ll buy you a beer.”

“Sorry man, I gotta work tomorrow.”

“Shit son, you ain’t worked a day in your life.”

“Are you done insulting me now? Cause if so, I’m gonna go.”

“Well, if you can’t hang with the big dogs, get your ass off the porch. That’s what I always say.”

Bobby turns and heads toward the door. Earl eyes the bartender, clears his throat and prepares to be as smooth as he’s ever been-

“Hey Sue, damn girl, let’s talk about them shorts.”

 

A few hours later . . .

“You still here Earl?” Sue asks.

“I’m waitin’ for you baby.”

“That’s what I like to hear. You wait right there while I lock up, there’s something I want to show you.”


Last Wednesday at Sue’s Place – Part 1

Last Wednesday at Sue’s Place – Part 2

Last Wednesday at Sue’s Place – Part 4

 

52 thoughts on “Last Wednesday at Sue’s Place – Part 3

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  3. Stories, this is great, so entertaining! Yuck, Earl, but wait, what’s Sue got to show him? I sure hope there’s a twist there. 😉 Your dialogue is terrific, as are all the little details and gestures, “Bobby turns half ass toward the window, not really looking out.” And then he says, “Yeah Earl, that’s real nice.” Perfect! Stories, please know I’m looking forward to the next part. Have a super evening. ~ Mia

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