I kissed my mother and said goodbye
Must’ve been fifteen years or more
Well I got me a job and I found a wife
Down in Ohio
I work the coal mines of Perry
Gonna put a little money away
Gonna buy some land and make a home
Here in Ohio
I lost my wife back in ‘64
And I’ve never been the same
Life don’t always work out right
But who’s to blame
I put my faith in Jesus Christ
Can you show me the way
Shine your light down this mine
And set me free
These days I walk alone
Along the Ohio
I watch the barges pass me by
Just waiting for a sign
There’s mountains on fire
Rivers of steel
Mills and the mines
And years rolling by
But I still don’t
See a sign

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Deep… 👌👌 nice one.
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Wow, this is very much like a ballad. Love it.
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Thank you very much. Yes, there was certainly a melody in my head when I wrote it.
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I can believe it! And my pleasure.
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This is nice.
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So poignant! 👍
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Thank you very much!
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You’re welcome!
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Flowed nicely – raw emotions and *thankfully* a fictional post. 🙂
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Thank you very much. And yes, this is fiction. Thankfully.
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intense and deep…
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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ur wc 🙂
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This is heart-wrenching but beautiful.
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Thank you!
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A blues-ey riff I hear in my marrow. Very nice!
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Thank you very much!
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Reblogged this on Footprints in the wind.
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And thank you for the reblog!
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Sounds a bit like an old song…very interesting 👍👍
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Thanks, that is kind of what I was feeling.
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👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Thank you!
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My pleasure.
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I don’t know you but I do care. At timed I pray for all my followers and will remember ehen the holy Spirit tells me and He Will. God bless you. Remember the good times as God gift to yo and hang on to Jesus that loves you.
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Is this not real? If so vrry good writinh lol
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I feel as an idiot. Is creative writing. Good job
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Don’t feel like an idiot. You were being very kind and I appreciate your words and thoughts.
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Stories, beautiful and lyrical, full of grit and the sting of life. You mopped the floor with my emotions, “Waiting on a Sign” is so good, you never disappoint. ~ Mia
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Thank you Mia, I always appreciate you reading!
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You’re welcome, I always look forward to your words.
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Great write
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Thank you so much!
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Whoa! That was amazing! 🙂
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you very creative and good at what you do.
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Thank you very much.
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Okay…this touched my heart 😖😖…away for so long but awakened by this😊
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Thank you, I really appreciate that!
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Thing don’t change. We change. Said Thoreau . Ha faith. Great verse. Deep and thoughtful. Thank you. Regards. Jay
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting!
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Deep
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Thank you
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Poignant!
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There’s your Ohio River poem!!! Much better than mine. I really love the feeling of this piece. Great writing. 👏👏
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You remembered. I’m glad you like it and appreciate the kind words but certainly not better than yours. They each are their own, equal in every way.
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Yes! I’ve been watching for it:) I really it like too. Thank you and I appreciate that!:)
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Such a beautiful poem 🙂
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Amazing write-up!
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Thank you.
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Its really deep !!!
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