My little girl pleaded for me not to go. That was the hardest moment of my life, looking down at those big blue teary eyes, ripping me apart with every sob. I was shook by the memory of the words I had told her when this all began. All the nights I held her close, promising I would never leave her, that I would always be there to keep her safe. She’s too young to understand but this is the only thing left for me to do for her. If I go now, her and her mother will have their names moved to the bottom of the list. So this is my love for her, my final gift. A little more time.
I stand in line with over six hundred others on this morning. The way it has been since the onset of the event. Hundreds, thousands of people, day after day, herded like cattle across the platform and on board the waiting vessels. From the beginning they had made their intentions clear. They would take those willing to go first and then the rest would be taken systematically by force. Everyone who has been part of the leaving, so far, has gone voluntarily. This willingness to sacrifice themselves so others could remain has given me a renewed faith in humanity. Never in the span of human history had all the people of the world come together like this, with a common goal, a common sacrifice. And through this faith I recognize the hope I had thought lost.
As we near the entrance to the vessel, I look to the man at my right, then the woman to my left. We each instinctively reach for the others hand. With fingers locked, hand in hand, as brother and sister, we step aboard and leave this world behind.
My last breath is a breath sweet with the belief that those who remain will come together and find a way. All they need is a little more time.
Originally posted at Morality Park
with everybody just gushing about how monstrous the world is, this hits me like a revelation
thanks for sharing
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Thank you very much. It can be done.
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Very moving…made me think of today’s society and my hope that “with a little more time”, people will stop this senseless name-calling and violence and come together to solve our problems. Probably won’t happen, but one can hope.
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Thank you and I agree. I really can’t understand how people can’t see that what they are doing is not helping anyone and that anger and hate will never bring about positive change. It’s such a simple child level concept.
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You’d think that since they’re acting like children, they could reason as well as children…but nope…
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Very good. I love the automatic sense of brotherhood, camaraderie between those volunteers. The love for those left behind in, really, the ultimate sacrifice. This inspired me.
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Thank you Tara, that means a lot to me coming from you.
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My mind just thought of this whole story continuing forward with glimpses of the past. I like it when I read stuff like this that sparks the imagination and thought. So thank you. I needed that.
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Hey, see, I’m worth having around sometimes!
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That you are, Stories. That you are.
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As always, great reading.
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Thank you Phyllis.
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You’re welcome
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I hav been enjoying very much to see you write in different ways. I love the way this reads. Very well done.
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I do appreciate that. Thank you very much for being one of my regular readers. That means a lot to me.
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You’re very welcome, and thank you very much for being one of my regular readers, which means a lot to me. I enjoy “hearing” the writer’s voice in his or her work, which from my own experience as a writer is hard to accomplish, and I always hear your voice in your pieces.
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Thank you again.
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Outstanding!!!!!
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Thank you!
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My pleasure
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Just in awe… as usual. I must tell you I enjoy reading your posts, I don’t usually comment as you have said all that needs to be said with your words. But. It can be nice to hear the words of appreciation once in awhile. And I do, appreciate the words you write. ~Kim
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Thank you very much Kim, that means a lot to me. I’m not much of a commenter either but I always read every word.
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I absolutely love your stories!!! You have a way of always leaving me holding my breath, waiting fo what will happen. In this, the palpable sorrow and camaraderie in the face of it are so powerful. Beautiful piece!!!! More stories please!
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Thank you for the kind words.
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What a beautiful and touching write. Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you very much for reading!
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Beautifully moving😍
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I appreciate that, thank you!
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I thought this was beautiful. Well done. Also, you’re one reader away from hitting 1K! So congratulations!!! 🙂
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Thank you very much for the kind words and taking the time to read my work!
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Of course!!
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It is nice to believe that there are parts of the human race who would give this ultimate sacrifice…. wonderful write!
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Thank you. Yeah, it would be nice if it didn’t take a global level catastrophe but who knows. I still have faith in people.
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You’re welcome.
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Enjoyed it. Well done my friend.
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Thank you very much!
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Thanks for all your support on my posts!
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You’re welcome, I really like your poetry. I may not comment very often but I am always reading.
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Interesting story 🙂
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Thank you very much!
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I feel overwhelmed by the beauty of this piece. There are so many interpretations of this and it fits each one of them perfectly. Maybe that’s the beauty of well-written works 🙂
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Thank you. Your kind words mean a lot to me.
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My pleasure 🙂
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Beautiful and moving story!
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Thank you very much!
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You have the calibre to show us the visual in your words. In between I felt, was I reading about the holocaust and then I subtly dawned the past can happen again. Time moves in circles. In less words you said much more. Beautifully expressed
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This is very kind of you to say and your words mean a lot to me. Thank you very much.
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Yeah…..I like this one… Good job sir 🙂
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Thank you!
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No thank you 🙂
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Heart wrenching and beautiful. Thank you. 🌟🌟
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I appreciate that very much, thank you.
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a father’s love told so beautifully. i miss my dad reading this. i am glad i found your writing. it is very good.
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Thank you so much.
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I wonder how this would turn out if it happened. This was so sad 😭 loved it
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I’ve wondered that myself. Thank you.
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River, this was an awesome write! Kept me reading, wanting more. Maybe a part2? enjoyed every word!
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Thank you very much. I totally forgot about this piece. It might be one to make into a short story. Thanks for reminding me.
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