Beyond This moment Or another Until gone The reasons No longer Matter This just Is Forgiving Is to Not forget What you Have given Me A gift I suppose Carried with me Always Memories Which choke And bind Never fade For while Most things Erode with time Some dust Never truly Settles
This was really good. I love the verses and how you formatted the poem. It goes great on the pauses. It brings up the seriousness and artistic signature. Nice. 😀
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I appreciate that. This is one of those pieces where I kept just staring at it, thinking it was too simple, incomplete. I finally accepted it says what I want it to say so it must be complete.
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❤
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Thank you!
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🙂
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Oh man this was damn neat 🌸👍😱
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Thank you very much.
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The last emoji was by accident. Sorry 😊
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No problem. Actually, I admit I don’t know what most emoji’s mean anyway.
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Haha I so agree with you
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This is so beautiful; complex simplicity, powerful without unnecessary window dressing. I really love it!
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I really appreciate that, thank you Susan.
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Always my pleasure!!
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Great poems. Shared this one on twitter.
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I really appreciate that, thank you!
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I like the way you play with words…. theyre sharp, I think, is a good way to describe it. Not in a cutting way (although they can be) but sharp like a wisp of cold I feel all the way to my bones. I love it.
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Wow, that is one of the best compliments my writing has ever received. I really appreciate that. Thank you.
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You’re welcome! And thank you for sharing your words with the rest of us. I’m not on wordpress everyday, but when I do get around to catching up with posts it’s always a pleasure to read what you’ve got up.
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Again, I appreciate that deeply, thank you.
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Absolutely wonderful.
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Thank you.
You know, every time I see your name, lovely Rita meter maid plays in my head.
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That’s been the case since high school. 😂
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Hey, at least it’s a good song. Could be much worse.
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It got worse in the late 80’s or 90’s – I can’t remember.
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I can’t remember the 80’s or 90’s either.
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😂 a new song came out and became my son’s favorite.
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why so always beautiful ? 🙂
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I don’t know. Maybe the right context can make anything beautiful.
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true 🙂
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Ooooh! I like this! I’m really into your poetry lately (I must have missed this genre of yours in the past). I better explore more…
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Thank you very much!
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A wonderful poem!
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Thank you!
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You are right,it doesn’t
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I really like stanza three. Ends very well.
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Thank you very much. I always respect your opinion.
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Oh yeah, I would love to check it out, thank you for letting me know.
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