Beyond This moment Or another Until gone The reasons No longer Matter This just Is Forgiving Is to Not forget What you Have given Me A gift I suppose Carried with me Always Memories Which choke And bind Never fade For while Most things Erode with time Some dust Never truly Settles
The Stories In Between 
This was really good. I love the verses and how you formatted the poem. It goes great on the pauses. It brings up the seriousness and artistic signature. Nice. 😀
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I appreciate that. This is one of those pieces where I kept just staring at it, thinking it was too simple, incomplete. I finally accepted it says what I want it to say so it must be complete.
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❤
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Thank you!
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🙂
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Oh man this was damn neat 🌸👍😱
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Thank you very much.
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The last emoji was by accident. Sorry 😊
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No problem. Actually, I admit I don’t know what most emoji’s mean anyway.
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Haha I so agree with you
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This is so beautiful; complex simplicity, powerful without unnecessary window dressing. I really love it!
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I really appreciate that, thank you Susan.
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Always my pleasure!!
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Great poems. Shared this one on twitter.
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I really appreciate that, thank you!
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I like the way you play with words…. theyre sharp, I think, is a good way to describe it. Not in a cutting way (although they can be) but sharp like a wisp of cold I feel all the way to my bones. I love it.
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Wow, that is one of the best compliments my writing has ever received. I really appreciate that. Thank you.
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You’re welcome! And thank you for sharing your words with the rest of us. I’m not on wordpress everyday, but when I do get around to catching up with posts it’s always a pleasure to read what you’ve got up.
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Again, I appreciate that deeply, thank you.
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Absolutely wonderful.
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Thank you.
You know, every time I see your name, lovely Rita meter maid plays in my head.
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That’s been the case since high school. 😂
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Hey, at least it’s a good song. Could be much worse.
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It got worse in the late 80’s or 90’s – I can’t remember.
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I can’t remember the 80’s or 90’s either.
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😂 a new song came out and became my son’s favorite.
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why so always beautiful ? 🙂
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I don’t know. Maybe the right context can make anything beautiful.
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true 🙂
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Ooooh! I like this! I’m really into your poetry lately (I must have missed this genre of yours in the past). I better explore more…
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Thank you very much!
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A wonderful poem!
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Thank you!
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You are right,it doesn’t
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I really like stanza three. Ends very well.
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Thank you very much. I always respect your opinion.
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Oh yeah, I would love to check it out, thank you for letting me know.
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