One spark, of many To catch the kindling Barely smoldering I hold it In the palm of My hand Do I remember How to do this A steady, concentrated Breath A wisp of smoke Rises Small flame Dances So gentle, delicate Crackling with potential With patience Once nurtured Tended, contained Can sustain life Or if released Destroy everything In its path Violently, beautifully Indifferent Giving way For the chance Of new life To grow
So beautifully penned
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Thank you very much!
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My pleasure
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Wow. I can’t even….
yeah, this is perfect. While the black lines speak of fire, the white bits in between say something completely different. I love how you can do that.
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Thanks. I’m glad you can interpret it that way. In my mind this has absolutely nothing to do with actual fire.
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That’s how I read it. A gloriously penned metaphor.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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I imagined Prometheus trying to shield his fiery gift from the wind. A good adventure, this poem. 🙌
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Thank you for your words, they are much appreciated.
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Said beautifully
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Thank you very much.
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My pleasure
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I love it, it’s so beautiful ❤
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Thank you very much.
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Very well-written! 🙂
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Wonderful poem!
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Thank you very much.
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You’re welcome.
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Beautiful!
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Thanks!
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Great poem. Great truth.
minor suggestion– I wonder if this line break flows better?
I hold it in
the palm of
The other lines all flow very well.
“Desire is a flame that can light a lantern or burn down a house.” Mitch Teemley
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I agree with that suggestion, thank you. I always appreciate feedback on improvement.
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I used to write poetry, but you are a much better poet than I am.
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Thank you for that.
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I admire this..❤
You have so beautifully presented the qualities of flame
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Thank you very much for reading and your kind words.
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Reading this reminded me of so many beautiful bittersweet moments.
I enjoyed reading this so much!
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Thank you very much, that means a lot to me.
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You’re quite welcome sir.
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Painfully relevant for me. I always need reminders of the beauty patience can bring.
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I think most of us probably do. Thank you.
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Reblogged this on misterkaki.
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Thank you.
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