I’ve got your once upon a time
But not your happily ever after
That lies dead ten feet behind me
I claim I found it that way
But I’m sure it’s my fault
At least in part
Because I knew, have always known
It never had a chance
Not with me holding its hand
Nothing beautiful ever does
Blame me if you want
But I did try, I did love you
In my own special way
But I’m sure it makes no difference
Not on a day like this
Your sun glistening
Through the rear view mirror
As I drive away
Love this
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Your phrasing was especially good in this one. You should be proud.
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Fantastic
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Rather enjoyed that
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I love this! The first 4 lines are perfection!
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Thank you, that means a lot coming from you.
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Love it
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Lovely beginning and ending as well as everything in between.
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Thank you for reading!
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this is awesome! i love it!
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Gorgeous 🙂
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Really love reading all your posts.. 🙂
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Nice post – a touch of awesomeness!
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Always a pleasure!
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all of us think that we mess up. i think
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True. Thank you for reading.
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Wow wow i love the starting
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Ur welcome😊😊😊
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It made me feel sad. I think it’s great.
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I appreciate that, thank you for reading.
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Piognant but beautiful
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Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
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It’s a pleasure always 😊
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Oh Stories, how I feel this. In particular,
“Because I knew, have always known
It never had a chance
Not with me holding its hand
Nothing beautiful ever does”
This spoke to me. Thank you. Now… what do I do with it, that’s the thought for today.
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That is quite a compliment, thank you.
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Great job!!
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Sometimes your creation reminds me of a musical album that I keep so close to me. Great work my friend.
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I appreciate that deeply, thank you.
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Cool
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Your writing is lovely! And the photo is excellent, by the way.
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That is very kind, thank you for reading.
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Lovely,really lovely.fine art
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You are most welcome,as usual😊
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Great post. Beautiful write up especially the first five lines. In fact every line was well put together
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A beautiful tale of lost love ❤️
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Thank you!
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My pleasure
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Reblogged this on From 1 Blogger 2 Another.
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Beautiful. Very well said
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Sad… but with a hint of positivity in the end. Wonderful write!
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The world of words between those first two lines!
Nicely written
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I wish this didn’t resonate, but I enjoyed re-reading the way you so craftily penned another chapter of my life.
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Enjoy all of your work, but this is one of my favorites. The first two lines say it all.
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Thank you, I really appreciate that.
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Great poem! Love the closing image. Driving away is like letting go of someone.
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Thank you very much, I always appreciate your feedback.
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Beautifully written, I felt it in my soul!
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Thank you for reading!
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It was sad but, I loved this.
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Lots & lots of talent!
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Nice flow and expression of thought.
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Hear touching! I teared up.
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Awww this hit me right in the feels…
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“Your sun glistening” : the most beautiful expression I’d ever read.
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome.
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