So much dropped Along the way Dreams Too heavy to carry Weigh us down In every attempt To move forward Till one day We wake and realize We've lost ourselves In this It's not much But I carry what's left Hold it close For it's all I have My faith That one day I will make something From these few Shattered pieces Emerge from this Broken place And then I will dare To dream Again
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Gorgeous!
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This is beautiful.
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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Plays on the heartstrings.
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Thank you for reading!
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Sometimes, all we have is our dreams…hold tight.
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I agree, thank you.
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My pleasure reading.
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The word flow is so smooth that I read your poem in one breath!! It’s well-written!! 🙂
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Thank you, that means a lot.
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You are welcome!! 🙂
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Wow this is amazing
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Thank you for your kind words, I really appreciate you reading.
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Lovely. Hopeful ❤️
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Thanks Rita!
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You are so very welcome.
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We lose ourselves in making those dreams come true but nobody tells you that. Beautiful 🖤🖤
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Thank you for your comment!
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This is sad, yet hopeful, beautiful and weighty (it remains heavy somehow). I am a big fan of your writing!!!!
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Thank you. And the feeling is mutual!
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Lovely!
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Thank you.
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Beautiful words
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Thank you.
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Enjoyed it, its a nice composition.
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome.
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To much weighing people down in this world
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Yes there is. Thank you for reading.
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This is absolutely perfect! I love it!!
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Thank you very much.
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Beautifully written 🙂
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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Beautifully written.
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Thank you so much.
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Loved this one.
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Thank you very much!
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How do you come up with such beautiful lines, each time.
It’s so so beautiful 😭😿
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Thank you, I appreciate your kind words.
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welcome 😋😊
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This is so incredible! I loved each line ❤
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Thank you very much.
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My pleasure 🙂
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Flows nicely. Good message. Dreams can be hard to hold onto, and for other people they are very hard to let go of.
Only suggestion for improvement is maybe one or two concrete images. Poetry comes alive with specific things we can see in the mind’s eye, or smell or touch.
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Thank you for reading and I appreciate your feedback, you always give me something to think about.
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Great one! 👍👍
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Thanks Ray!
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☕️🥨👍
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Brilliant piece, I felt every word! 🙂
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Thank you.
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My pleasure! 🙂
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I loved this because holding on to dreams takes effort to achieve them. Many do not reach the top where they can say I did it my dreamed is finalized and I am successful. Great words you committed to make us think. Thank you !!
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Your continued support means a lot to me.
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No problem my friend
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Recuerdo uno de mis sueños en una escalinata como esta. Gracias por el bello poema.
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Thank you for reading.
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Beautiful words!
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Thank you.
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💜
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humbly expressed with holding the last straw of hope, very touching
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Thank you!
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