Do people actually ever run through fields of flowers
And if so why?
So someone can take their picture, put a nice inspirational quote on it
Feed it to the masses
Disguised as an original thought
As a child I ran through cornfields
Not for peace or serenity, to touch God
But because it frightened me
That feeling of getting lost
In something so much larger than you
The maze of stalks, row after row, seemingly endless
The childish thought you may never make it back home
Lost, trapped forever in the web of a corn spider
A broken ankle, no one to hear your cries
Only the swift blades of the combine to shred you to nothing
Your poor mother, weeping
Rocking on the edge of your bed
Clutching your little league glove with trembling hands
In an empty room
Those childish fantasies are much closer to our reality
Than fields of daisies, a beautiful woman in a flowing summer dress
Sun on her face, the breeze just right
Many of us are still that scared little kid
Trapped in the cold, dark, wet slicing leaves of the towering stalks
Bound by the corn spiders web, waiting for the harvest
The mud disguising our soul as the combine draws near
Though I admit, I do love the flowers when they grow
I’ve found my place among the corn
This was a wonderful post
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Good combo. 😍
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Good poem. Those spiders look suspiciously like the ones I encountered in the sorghum fields…
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading.
Careful in those sorghum fields . . .
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Through the fear of the corn and the pleasantries of the flower field. The two are tied symbolically to one another in life. It is that one needs to balance the darkness with the light. I enjoyed this post.
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Beautiful poem with awesome images
Liked it
Keep sharing 💙
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yes it was!
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Ooh nice …love it
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Childhood fantasies ~ adult realities ~ nice to read you overcame your fears. I loved the poem ~ so many beautiful memories. 🙂
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Beautiful poem and photography.
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I used to run and hide in the fields of pushki or fireweed. Both of which can reach six feet or higher. Except instead of rows it was just stalks and stalks and stalks. One could hide within those blades, if one lifted the stalks back up behind you, to block the trail of would-be followers. I ran and hid for dark reasons but somehow I could find a small bit of peace within them, laying down and staring up at the little piece of sky afforded me. If you concentrated hard enough and lay there long enough, the shouts would die down and some quiet was a gifted, even for a short time. Very well written, Stories. You gave me the precious gift of a good memory in a dark time, even if adrenaline and fear is attached to it. Thank you.
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You are welcome, thank you for sharing your memories.
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I’m still one of those frightened children.
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I can be, at times.
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This is a masterful marriage of your poetry and prose! I absolutely love it. I felt every moment of it! The last line couldn’t be more perfect! You are so good at nailing the endings!
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Thank you very much, I didn’t have much confidence in this piece but decided to post it anyway.
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I am so glad you did. I love it! It is really different and so great! I shared it on Twitter.
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Thank you for sharing it, that means a lot to me.
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Fabulous! ‘He who walks behind the rows’ kept ringing in my head while reading.
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He wants you too Malachai . . .
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Ha!!!! Great and/or disturbed minds.
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I choose ‘and’
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Cornfields, mazes, always conjure the idea of danger lurking around the next bend. This was excellent!
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Thank you very much for reading Meg.
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My pleasure -as always!
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Wow. This is brilliant piece of work
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Thank you so much
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Down under,
we grow not the corn,
but the sugarcane.
To clear out snakes
before harvesting
the fields
are all put the flame.
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Hmm, death by combine or fire, not much of a choice.
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A chillingly depicted recession into minds cornfield nightmare.
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Thank you very much for reading.
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Damn. It is so wonderful to know exactly where to go for a guaranteed good read, each and every time. I’m practically an artistic changeling, but I find great comfort in always knowing where to find you.
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Thank you for the kind words, I really appreciate that.
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This is Devine thoughts. Beautiful.
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Thank you so much!
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I will never forget my first experience of a large cornfield.
This is brilliant!
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Thank you for reading!
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My pleasure! 😊
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I love this, reminds me of my childhood growing up at the rurals, we would play hide and seek in the corn fields and that feeling of fear and happiness when you’re submerged in the vast of green
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Original and creative! A pleasure to read!
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A beautiful one. Enjoyed it immensely…
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U r welcome.
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Reblogged this on raynotbradbury and commented:
The answer to the question ‘Why’…
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Thank you for the reblog.
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love that piece! well done! 👍
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Amazing poetry , perfection
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Perhaps we could learn to focus on the beauty of the flower and embrace the corns..It’s tough
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True. I guess the old saying applies that one can’t exist without the other. And lost in either is just that- lost.
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An excellent piece. Wonderful picture you paint.
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Thank you.
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Great writing!
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Excellent sharing. I recall hiding in the corn fields when younger so it brought back some memories.
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Thank you for reading, I really appreciate it.
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Never got lost in a cornfield but know that anxiety of being lost in a crown of people, I can feel that in this poem. Great write!
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Thank you very much!
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You’re most welcome!
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awesome! ^_*
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keep making more!
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Thanks! I’ll try.
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Brilliant piece, my friend.
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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Very well written!
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Thank you.
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Oh yes. I like this very much. ❤
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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Cornfields will never NOT be spooky!
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I agree.
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Beautiful!
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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That was dark yet thought provoking.
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You are welcome. I always look forward to your work.
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Great 👍
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Wow River! Absolutely great!
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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You’re welcome River, it’s my pleasure to acknowledge your creative work.
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