I study what seems
The electric
In dreams
There were two
Then three
Dancing
Bound by screams
Tendril to wrist
The synapse missed
In the emptiness
Between
Broken ladders
And three's
Consideration
For contemplation
Of rabbit filled
Holes
In the plot
Thickens
Tossed salad
Of words
From the second
Story to
The variables
Which invariably
Strikeout
The variation
In a variety
Before and after
A thought
Through which
We wave
The impulse
To find
Can't find
A pulse
Locked in
The third
I do
To marriage
Of chaos
Controlled
A lover's scorn
Though never worn
As the fit
Was never
Quite right
Erase the other
Born monochrome
Died technicolor
So lucid to me
Though strange
It seems
To study
Such things
Though I may
Try again
When I find
Or know
When

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Really is quite brilliant.
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Splendid.
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Incredible descriptions of what you have when you awake !!
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I appreciate that, thank you!
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You are welcome my friend. Keep working to build such dramatic scenes to wake up to !!
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The synapse missed in the emptiness between Love that line
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Wonderfully brilliant! Line after line I really enjoyed!
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Thank you Stella!
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Very well done!! The ingenuity of it is captivating. 😃 ~Kelsey
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Wow! Brilliant
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Thank you for reading and for the kind words.
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My pleasure
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Great. And so rhythmic.
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You r welcm
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in dreams we process a lot we cannot in our waking hours, I admire those who can dream, it takes a weight off living, there’s always an authenticity to your words that’s so defining
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Thank you so much for reading and the thoughtful comment.
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Enjoyed it.
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This is great 🙂
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That was fantastic!
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I loved where this took me, Stories. Vivid and flowing, then jolting, then fading memories, then stark contrast black and greys fading to colors coming in to focus. Three women holding hands dancing, twirling, laughing, hair turned to smoke and laughter fading out. Wait… what was it again? I can almost… no, it’s barely… yes… I wish I could remember. Come back to me again tonight.
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Thank you Tara.
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Dear Stories, what an incredible flight of ideas, seemingly unrelated, but oh no, they are! You’ve manage to turn a phrase on it’s side like a coin that has two sides. Bravo! This is really, really good stuff. ~ Mia
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Thank you Mia, that means a lot to me.
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Wow, amazing ❤️
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My pleasure ❤️
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Perfect , E. I love this ❤️
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Reblogged this on Go Dog Go Café and commented:
An electric pick by L Stevens, read the Stories In Between
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your are welcome, and it is an honour to highlight your poetry here.
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That means a lot to me, thank you again.
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I loved the sound and rhythm to start and then the diction and word play: what a delightfully-crafted creation from your palette choice of 26. 🙂
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, movement of the mind – love this piece
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