Lights are off
Candles lit
My new favorite song
Is playing
On the couch
My head in your lap
A hand on my chest
The other caressing my hair
Your fingers, so delicate
As they brush my forehead
I look up at your eyes
And think
What a mistake it would be
To kiss you
But an even bigger mistake
If I don’t
And then
You
Kissed me
Beautiful!
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Thank you.
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A better ending than Prufrock…
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Ha! thanks.
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Oh! This is so very wonderful. I can picture it perfectly. *sigh*
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Thank you.
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Beautiful imagery! Love it.
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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So romantic!
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Thanks. It was.
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Precious!
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Thank you.
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This is adorable
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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My pleasure
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Soul Stirring!!!
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Thank you.
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So sweet and romantic.
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Thank you.
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My pleasure!
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Awe! I love this! Sentual! 😀
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Thank you.
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Such a tender and beautiful love poem.
miriam
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Thank you Miriam.
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Beautiful
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Thanks.
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It was sweet.
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Thank you.
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Stories, beautiful, so romantic! ~ Mia
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Thank you Mia.
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Swoon worthy! Love this!
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Thank you.
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Beautiful, my friend. Haven’t read your stuff for a while but it’s still great! Going to go on a TSiB binge!
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
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This is simple yet captivating. I loved how you played with every word. Nice job!
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Thank you very much.
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I posted a new blog and I hope you could participate. Cheers! 😊
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For sure.
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*sighs deeply* ❤
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The ‘First Kiss’ ~ quite romantic ~ captured beautifully in poetic words ~ 🙂
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Thank you very much.
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I really need a moment like this. Beautiful.
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We all do. Thank you.
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Amazing… 🌸
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Thank you!
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Great job, you have the gift of writing. 🙂
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That is kind of you to say, thank you very much.
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It’s beautiful
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Thank you.
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My friend this was beautiful and romantic, from the past experience of your writing style, I was expecting a sweet twist in the end.
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Thank you so much my friend.
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welcome
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Oh, I do hope this is a true story… ❤
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Yes, it is.
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How wonderful! 😊
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Nicely penned!
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Thank you!
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You are welcome!
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❤💞❤💞❤💞❤
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So beautiful!❤
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Thank you.
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Beautiful poem. The ending a win win !
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Thank you for reading.
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A pleasure
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Romantic…
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Lovey
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The start of something wonderful… nicely written!
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Thank you very much.
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You’re welcome.
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Ah, awesome, this is beautiful…
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Thank you very much.
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you very much.
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😉
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Wordsmith! Reading the poem in the evening is so much better than during the day. 👌
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Thank you!
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Beautiful thoughts.
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