I don’t recognize
Any of this
But it’s not so bad
Just different
There’s something
Comforting
About the end
-Or so it seems
I don’t recognize
Any of this
But it’s not so bad
Just different
There’s something
Comforting
About the end
-Or so it seems
It certainly is
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Thank you for reading!
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My pleasure
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If end is better than what we had
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Better or just . . . different.
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Sometimes, different is all we need
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Very true!
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Felt like I read a post that was plucked from my head. Very relatable and nicely penned!
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Thank you, that means a lot to me.
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Beautiful read
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Thank you.
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My pleasure
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Well, ain’t that the truth couldn’t have said it better myself.
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Thanks for reading.
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There a profound simplicity in your poems. It’s hard to explain but it’s very genuine and touching. Well done!
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That is kind of you to say. This sort of compliment means more to me than I can put into words. Thank you.
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You are most welcome 🙂
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Flows very well!
Only suggestion for improvement is to add an image. Poems are always made stronger by adding things we can see, feel, hear, taste, touch.
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Thank you, I always appreciate your feedback.
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After watching Venom, I feel just different.
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I haven’t seen that yet but it does look good.
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I’m very much in the ‘change is good’ camp. But many fear change and then view it negatively. You’ve packed a lot into this short piece. Wonderful!
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I feel the same way. I most often welcome change. I fear stagnation much more than change.
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Consistency is the hobgoblin of small minds – Emerson
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You put weight into simplicity like no other. Beautiful piece!
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Thank you Susan.
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Last line is so profound. Loved reading it🙏
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Thank you very much!
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simple brief but deep… quick easy to read but lingers longer in your thoughts! these kinds are my favorite read! 🙂
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Thank you very much for the kind words, it means a lot to me that you liked it.
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🙂
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❤
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I love this poem, It’s so full of meaning!
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