I made a promise To an old friend That I’d be back This way someday But a restlessness Sleeps down Inside me Burning questions In my heart Where in this world Can I call My home Where in this Do I belong I’ve walked a long road Full of beginnings When all I wanted Was an end Will you still Remember me Is there still a place Inside your heart If I come back This way someday If I come back To you Someday
Someday Maybe

Poignant
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Thank you!
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This is so touching.
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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Welcome
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I’ve walked a long road
Full of beginnings
When all I wanted
Was an end
Waaaaaaaw!!!!
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Thanks, my friend!
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welcome
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Life is filled with chance encounters and unspoken goodbyes. Your poem made me recall so many of my friends I haven’t seen in ages. Beautiful!
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Thank you, that means a lot to me.
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Beautiful and poignant.
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Thank you very much.
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Oh, this is wonderful!
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Thanks Rita!
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My pleasure. Writing again, you can find it by the avatar I think – if you want.
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That’s great news, I will be sure to follow you again.
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Thanks. I’m not sure about the great news part, but I do appreciate your support.
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Always.
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Heartwarming
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Thank you.
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Dis is poignant
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Thanks!
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Pleasure
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True friends do not know forgetness..
Great poem..
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Thank you very much.
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Welcome !
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Powerful enough to make me feel longing all day…
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Beautiful read.
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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I Love the ways you write about time and motion. Beautiful piece!!!!!!
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Thank you.
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Very stylish, classic I’d say. Great 👍
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Thanks Ray!
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Beautiful – one’s mind wanders aimlessly at times – love to read a sequel. 🙂
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Thank you. There could be a sequel, I’m sure there’s a long way to go until the days over.
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I love this – it reads like the lyrics of a song. 💗
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Thank you. Yeah, there was a melody in my head when I wrote it.
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I can imagine
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You will never know until you go back 🙂 Beautiful piece.
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Thank you for reading.
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Beautiful piece of longing…specially the lines
Where in this world
Can I call my home…
Loved it👍🏻👍🏻😇
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Thank you very much!
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Stories! This is awesome!
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I appreciate that. I actually felt this was a throw away piece but I posted it anyway. I think it’s missing a stanza.
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….mmm… possibly. yes, I could see how you’d feel that way. still… I’m glad you posted it.
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A melancholy masterpiece. Loved it!
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Thank you.
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Just gorgeous.
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Thank you.
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Nicely done
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Thank you.
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My pleasure
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Very touching
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Thank you, I really appreciate that.
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Profoundly beautiful, indeed!
“Where in this world
Can I call
My home
Where in this
Do I belong
I’ve walked a long road
Full of beginnings
When all I wanted
Was an end”
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Thank you, I really appreciate that.
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My pleasure!
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A joy! As always!
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There is a feeling of such sad longing in this poem but also of hope. I hope he finds himself in the open arms of his friend. Xx
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Really enchanting!
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Wonderful!
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on Seoul Sister.
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This poem resonates so sweetly, thank you for writing it.
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And thank you for reading it. And for the reblog.
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what a rhythm. well done!!
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Thank you.
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Stanza 4 really stands out. Well done!
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Thank you very much!
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Powerful words.
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Thank you very much.
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Dude, is that a new pic of you? Cool.
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Yup. Good or bad, that’s me.
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It’s all good brother.
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This tugs at my heart… now in this season of my life more than ever ❤️
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Thank you very much!
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Very touching. Beautifully penned
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I think I am not really getting the apt adjective to describe your writing…. Its more than beautiful… ☺keep writing.
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Thank you, that’s very kind.
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Simple …n.. Magnificent @ the same time. What a combo.
Amazing… Loved it💓
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That’s kind of you to say, thank you very much.
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This was beautifully done…bravo!
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome.
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The words spoke to my heart. Beautiful poem. Maybe that’s why I was led to this poem today because it describes exactly how I feel right now.
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Thank you for reading. It means a lot to me that this spoke to you.
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Very nice!
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Thank you very much!
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This is beautifully penned. I have selected “Someday Maybe” as my pay it Forward.
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Thank you very much, that is kind of you.
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It is very well deserved! You are welcome 🙏💜😊
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River Dixon This one has brought out the many trips I made hitch hiking around the country side. I walked one to many times but it always provided incredible times and incredible people. Keep writing you are some good !!
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Thanks friend!
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You are welcome !
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Reblogged this on Go Dog Go Café and commented:
inhiscare753 pick for Pay It Forward Thursday at the GDGC
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Thank you!
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Wonderful, the roving heart of a wanderer always seeking adventure, but in reality looking for a place to call home and settle down.
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Thank you very much for reading!
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You’re very welcome 😊
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Reblogged this on The Idea Journal.
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Thank you for the reblog.
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You’re welcome! Did you write the poem yourself? It’s amazing! I kind of have a soft spot for such poetry.
Keep up the great writing:)
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Yeah, everything I post on the blog is written by me. I appreciate you reading!
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That’s great! It’s good to find like minded people who write about the stuff that matters to you the most. I look forward to reading your content in the future!
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I appreciate that, thank you again.
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Someday 👍
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I’ve never really left a comment before, River, old boy, but everything I have so-far read has been excellent. This one included. RE-posted on twitter @trefology
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Thank you sir, that is greatly appreciated.
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I feel like I am currently living these words. It’s everything when you feel that connection.
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Thank you for reading!
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