And sometimes the blue turns to gray
As lost puppies push their nose into the sand
Digging along the shore
For something, anything
Wasting away, starving, thirsty
How long can they dig
Before the indifference of the tide
Carries them away
Why is it no one told them
There’s nothing to be found
Only the repetition of digging
The days blur; searching, searching
Till we finally understand what it is they’re looking for
But it’s not there, hasn’t been for a long time
Or maybe it never was
And we command them to stop, to come back
Because it doesn’t matter anymore
But they’re too distracted to notice
The tide, as it overtakes them
We dive in, grab all we can in desperation
They remember, welcome us
We who abandoned them
Only now, to realize
The things we have done, didn’t do
They lick the tears from our face
As we are pulled
Further and further from the safety of the shore
We thought we’ve known these cold, dark waters
Claimed to have sailed them for years
But we had no idea
No real grasp
Of how dark and cold things can really be
And we are alone
Suspended in the emptiness
Watching the lifeless body
Of each puppy
Float away from us
Too late
Though they say it never is
To remember
What they were looking for
In the sand
Where we once walked
And laughed
And dreamed
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Definitely one of your best poems. I really like the imagery.
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Thank you. Nothing like drowned puppies to bring out the sunshine, eh?
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Oh, I wasn’t going to be the one to make THAT comment…
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Come on, if I can’t rely on you then what have I got?
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Yeah… What HAVE you got?! 😮
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Good question.
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A sea of puppy corpses.
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Better than more plastic.
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Perfect cure for a hangovwr
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Youtube hangover?
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Hair of the dog.
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It’s quite possible you are now messing with a son of a bitch.
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Your mother was a lovely lady. Bitches are loyal. Remember that. I don’t mess but I do love to play. Sometimes playing does get messy.
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I actually have never liked that song. Lame chorus.
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Which song do you not like? Which chorus are you referring? A bird sings many songs, and there is but one voice who sings the songs I sing. Choral quails I listen but do not know how to join in.
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Hair of the dog
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Aah. Ack! No! I drink my hangovers away. I fight fire with fire.
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It’s the only way.
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Fuck yeah. Btw how them puppers doing? They still floating around and shit? Or have they gone out to sea?
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Darndest thing, one of them was still kicking a little bit. We made it back to shore and with some doggy CPR he came ‘round. First thing he did when we got back home is piss on the rug. Oh well.
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Marking his territory. He’s just glad to be safe and home. Or pissed. Not sure which.
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A little of both I hope.
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Good good. Balance, moderation and a healthy amount of confusion. Perfection.
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WWWHHOOOOOOOAAAAA PUPPY POWER far out.
I’d just want to get a trawler and catch all those puppies and bring them back. But it would be useless for they would be but bloated bags of brine, their fur coarse like with salt and sand. It’d make me cry, to have no more puppies in my puppy mansion in their puppy butler suits, no longer serving drinks nor sniffing butts.
Damn, just had to react like a human and not a mermaid otherwise I’d run out and save you too.
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You could always get them stuffed in various poses and greet them each day as if everything is just fine. Save money on dog food too.
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That is true, but where would i keep all my dead prostitutes?
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I thought we went over this before? You gotta eat them, you can’t just have that kind of thing laying around stinking up the place.
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But the puppies did that! I just wanted to play! And the puppies cleaned them up for me! I subsist on night and mares, not skin nor hair!
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Never trust a puppy.
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Obviously not. Look they’re all dead now and I’ve got another delivery of professionals arriving in like 20 minutes. Never send a pup to do the work of a wolf
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Interesting topic and motives. Alluring for reading. 😀
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Thanks for reading!
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I like the drowned puppy imagery
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Thank you.
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Oh my God! This is just heartbreaking and amazing and brilliant and so sad; I’m gabbling because I don’t have the words to express my feelings about this poem. You are a wordsmith indeed :O) x
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Thank you, I’m very happy you like it.
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I hope you don’t mind but I have to reblog this, it’s too brilliant to not share x
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I don’t mind at all, thank you for your support!
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Thank you. You definitely have that – I think you’re amazingly talented :O) x
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Reblogged this on All About Life and commented:
It’s not often that a poem renders me speechless but this did…….it’s dark, deep and wonderful….
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The boy in me can’t wait to see what you can do with cats.
(“The indifference of the tide” is universally devastating however.)
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Oh man, cats. The possibilities are endless.
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Wonderful poem full of pathos and mind bending imagery.
The tide may be indifferent but people still revel in surfing the waves.
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Thank you very much. Very true, I imagine the tide is best embraced and/or challenged.
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It is an inspiring post! You have an awesome site. I hope you will visit my travel blog: https://my-anasa.com/
Thank you!
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Thank you. And yes, I will check out your blog. Thanks for stopping by.
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It was a pleasure to visit your blog and I will be back. Many thanks.
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Thank you. And likewise with yours.
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Thanks 🙂
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Absolutely wonderful. I was moved deeply by the ‘indifference of the tide’ phrase. Outstanding.
It immediately brought to mind an old, old song I love by Henry Gross. Great job.
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Thanks Rita!
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Beautifully written. I enjoy your poem. Sad but so true. Very glad Lisa reblog your work. Nice meeting you. I’m Dominique. Can’t wait to read more of you.
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate you stopping by.
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My pleasure. I will visit again soon.
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I could see the puppies run around chasing the edge of the waves and digging for clams along the shore line. I enjoyed this poem a lot great imagery inside each line of it !!
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Thank you my friend.
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You are welcome my friend !!
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Loves the imagery 💕💕
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Thank you!
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Not puppies! 😢 sadness, but really good.
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Thank you! But don’t worry, the puppies are only symbolic.
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Thought-provoking. I’m glad they’re only symbolic. I do think of ourselves similar to the puppies – how we search and dig into the unknown, desiring to achieve or find what may not be there. We spend our entire lives searching, often to be washed away in our dreams without ever achieving. Maybe we can notice the obvious that would give us focus and a target to pursue, whereas digging and digging we often lose.
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Thank you. You got where I was coming from with this. I appreciate you reading.
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Thank you! Yes, it became clear as I neared the latter part. Good insight. 🙂
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This sort of ripped me apart. It is extraordinarily sad, and heavy and really really good!!!!!
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Thank you Susan.
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This poem is absolutely beautiful!
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Thank you, I really appreciate you reading.
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🙏🏻😘🙏🏻😘
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Absolutely impressive.the way you penned it and the imaginary you gave.
P.s
Love the new picture
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Thank you! Hopefully I don’t scare people away.
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Ah,someone is looking for compliments here 😉no scaring away 😊that it could be me early morning with no make up but no pics of such sort will ever leave my house 😜have a good weekend
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Actually, I was referring to the poem. I had a couple people tell me I shouldn’t write about dead puppies because it was too depressing. Hope you have a great weekend too!
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Ops😳Well,unfortunately life is made of sad and depressing things too ,hiding our head under the sand won’t help😊
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I agree.
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Excellent poem, poor puppies.
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Thank you.
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This brought me to tears.
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Thank you for reading. People can find themselves in such a dark place at times. But I believe it’s never too late to find your way back to the shore.
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Absolutely. I’ve been there and I think it’s really quite impossible to be a poet which touches hearts without having felt like we were drowning at times.
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Very true. Thank you again.
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Such a beautiful read. Loved the artistry you created
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Thank you.
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My pleasure
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Your writing is beyond amazing! I’m blown away
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Thank you, that means a lot to me.
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Wow.
What an absolutely powerful poem.
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Thank you very much!
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That was intense…very well done!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome.
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Awesome poem.<3
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Thank you!
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❤
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Inspiring
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The best way to describe this poem. A masterpiece!
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That is very kind of you to say, thank you.
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My pleasure! 🙂
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Lots of great images, and fresh images I’ve never considered before. Well-written.
My only suggestion (or thought to consider) is the final stanza isn’t parallel in structure due to the much shorter line breaks. It didn’t flow as well as the previous stanzas.
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Thank you, I’ll look at the final stanza and consider what you suggest.
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Just my viewpoint. I have an English Degree, and am partial towards traditional poetry with even stanzas. I like parallel structure.
Free verse poetry has no rules, but you do need to carefully judge how well the line breaks work in creating flow. The best way is to read it out loud.
If you create shorter lines in your final stanza, it should be done deliberately, for an intended effect.
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I appreciate your opinion. Constructive feedback is always welcomed.
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The sea is no ones friend I think
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Perhaps not. Or maybe it is neither friend nor foe, but just “is”.
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Yes true so true it is as it is but I am not much of a swimmer yet salt water is good
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I’ve never enjoyed swimming. The beach is pretty but not really my thing.
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Not my thing at all thank you but the beach is majestic
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Thanks
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Merry Christmas
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Thank you, you too. Have a great holiday.
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Thi is beautiful
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Thank you very much!
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unbearably beautiful, it stirred many emotions in me and took me to a place, not sure where, but it transported me, this is art thanks for sharing 🙂
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Thank you very much for reading.
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This is such an accurate observation and the metaphor is perfect. Thank you!
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You’re welcome, thank you for reading.
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This is deeply philosophical, sometimes I wonder whether you’ve lived for eons on earth…
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Some days it sure feels like it.
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Greatt blog you have here
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Thank you.
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