Why does this caged beast sing
While the world burns around it
Lulled by deaf-tone melodies
Placate with the newest of things
And the prettiest of flowers
Your false touch
Prevents self-awareness
And the knowing
Of the absence of silence
A force left sleeping
On a bed of stories and verse
Dreams like melted wax
Drip from the cage
Caught between octaves
A suppressed will
Better to not awaken
For if this beast
Was to be unleashed
The world would know
Flames
Like never seen
Before
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A beautiful read
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Thank you.
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My pleasure
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Damn, that was powerful. Making content for the next book? 😀
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Thanks. Yeah, I have a few things in the works, it’s hard to know what exactly to focus on. I flip flop back and forth between projects. I’m sure you can relate to that!
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Totally. 😀
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Very powerful as always.
This was gorgeous:
“Dreams like melted wax
Drip from the cage
Caught between octaves.”
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I appreciate your appreciation and welcoming my thanks.
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you never disappoint.
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Thanks Mike, I appreciate that.
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That was awesome.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful
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Thank you!
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Fabulous 👏🏻👏🏻
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Thank you Rita!
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My pleasure
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What Rita said 👆… Fabulous! I love the artwork you select to accompany your pieces, too.
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Thank you very much Meg.
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You’re welcome!🙏
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Powerful.
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Thanks!
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Yup. Good thing I have the diabeetus to stop me… for now. I already know the secret of the zero and the sudden awakening from the empty white, sudden drop and splat split splot it is done. But not yet finished for the black turns again the white when I awaken and open my eyes.
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Damn you diabeetus straight to hell . . . You won’t get me like you did my father.
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You resent and relent just as me! I’m not ready yet to join my father. We thought he choked but it was the chemo-cals that weakened his poor engine heart to the point where it couldn’t keep up. Pulled it apart and broke in his throat. Not the pipes that choked but the engine that did.
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very good 😀 I do find it unsettling how such a beast could sing…
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Let’s hope it doesn’t figure out it’s been tricked.
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Read, read and read again – there is so much within these words! Brilliant as always River :O) xx
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Thank you.
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This is a heavy flame, a beautiful poem. It is ache and rage. Beautiful. I often feel so humbled by your work.
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Thank you Susan.
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Amazing poetry!
I will keep your work in mind for purchasing. My dear, I have a big build of books to read. There are so many talented writers here on WP, and you are definitely one. Thank you!
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I really appreciate that, thank you!
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Nice piece
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Excellent piece.😍
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Thank you very much!
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So strong and evocative, the flame burning yet stuttering oyt, makes me think of our failure to keep our earth alive.
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Thank you for reading.
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A strong & lovely piece – thank you
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Thank you very much for reading.
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The shorter lines in the ending pack a punch. I also like the longer lines earlier in the poem.
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Thank you very much for the feedback.
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Powerfully Expressive writing. Beautifully written
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Thank you! I appreciate your continued support.
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🙏💜😊
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amazing River, amazing!!! happy days! PedroL
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Thank you!
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🙂
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Ur writings are amazing
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Thank you very much!
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Those opening two lines are bloody brilliant!! And that’s exactly been my struggle over the past few years. Why try to carve something beautiful in a world that’s going to burn? Why celebrate life when I’m not even sure I think society is worth saving? But you do write the darkness very well…. Bring on the night!!
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Thank you. You raise some good points. Why? Solid question. I suppose we can either join in and throw more fuel on the fire, or we can say fuck it, and walk away, carve out our own space in the chaos.
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Yeah – carve your space in the chaos! That’s the one…
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It’s certainly not easy but it can be done.
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A beautiful garland of words.
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Thank you very much!
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I love it!
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Thanks, Dawn.
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