The lamp flickers
As it burns through
The last of the oil
Outside, snow falls
A log on the fire
I pretend itβs you
Covering my feet
With a blanket
As you always did
On crumbling pages
Black and white
I delicately trace
Your fading smile
Flipping through
As old photographs
Give ghostly reminders
Of the way
Things used to be
Though long, I find solace
In these nights
Remembering, watching
Trails of failing light
Dancing across an empty chair
-Your empty chair
And I wait
For one last thing to burn out
Before I see you again
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This is so beautiful and sad.
Happy new year, and I hope this next year brings you much joy
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Thank you, Happy New Year to you too.
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I love the longing in this poem, and how well you described the scene in the first stanza; I feel like I can visualize sitting in a dark room illuminated by only one lamp, trying to keep warm while the snow falls.
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate that.
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It was my pleasure.
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Mesmerising!
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Thank you.
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Damn nice, man. Absolutely WOW. Very dark, but nice.
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Thanks, I appreciate that.
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Beautifully written… love it…πππππππππππππ€©π€©π€©πππππππππ
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Thank you!
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My pleasure…ππππππβΊοΈπ€©
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Well, this poem with that imagery and wordcraft will surely not be going out, leaving me, anytime soon. It entranced me into a post-reading stupor…
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Thatβs kind of you to say, thank you.
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Beautiful poem
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Thank you.
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Your words carried me there. Loved reading. Happy New Year!
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Thank you very much. And a Happy New Year to you as well.
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Oh, my friend, this is absolutely exquisite. It strikes such a deep chord in my heart, especially today. As ever, you inspire me.
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Thank you very much. Your words mean a lot to me.
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Every word 100% true! You truly are one of my favorite writers. Your range is enviable! I am not one who can read multiple books at a time, so I am finishing up the novel I am reading and then going to read your books!! I cant’ wait!!!
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Thank you. I hope they turn out to be worth your time to read.
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More than!
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So visual… you put us right in the room. Beautiful, sad and penetrating, River. I love this.
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Thank you very much, Meg.
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A masterpiece at least u can see your beloved
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Thank you very much.
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Oh how poignant. Itβs beautiful, River.
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Thanks Rita!
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Beautifully written. But so so sad. I loved it. π
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Thank you very much.
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You’re welcome. βΊ
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This is beautiful as usual. Happy new year !!βΊοΈβΊοΈ
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Thank you, Happy New Year to you too!
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I absolutely adore this. Youβre magic, River.
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Thank you, Tara. I hope you are doing well.
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Poignant and beautiful at the same time.
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Thank you!
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Another good one. Especially the conclusion.
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Thank you.
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Just beautiful, nice one!
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Thank you!
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Really beautiful words!
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Thank you very much!
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Beautifully crafted.
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Thank you so much.
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Always a pleasure.
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How beautiful and nostalgic! I love it.
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Thank you very much!
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River, there’s such a beautiful sadness to this piece. The waiting/longing is alluring and comforting at the same time. Lovely! Please enjoy your evening and have a terrific weekend. ~ Mia
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Thank you, Mia. Have a great weekend yourself!
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You’re welcome, thank you!
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Oh this is just beautiful River, there is so much feeling in this poem! I can almost see the tired old man sitting in his rocking chair reliving his life with tears in his eyes but a small smile of remembrance – exquisite writing :O) x
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Thank you very much!
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In the space of a poem you captured a novel’s worth of meaning, very loving and real.
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Thank you very much, I appreciate the kind words.
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I love your writing
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Thank you.
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This was so moving!
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Thank it. It is great to see you again.
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Beautifully wistful River. Wishing you a great New Year ahead.
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Thank you, you too!
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Thank you.
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Poignant and extremely Beautiful.
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Thank you very much.
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This is sad and beautiful at the same time. Well done π
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Thank you very much.
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Truely touching.
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Thank you.
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you!
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Excellent thoughts River. It’s amazing the thoughts that arise while watching the flickering flames. π
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Thank you.
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Hauntingly beautiful. Especially the last two lines.
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Thank you very much.
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I echo what “Floating Gold” said about it being “hauntingly beautiful”, that was the exact phrase that came to my mind after reading it. Well done!
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Thank you very much, that’s kind of you to say.
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You are very welcome, I meant it.
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Beautifully written, absolutely love the setting. The reflective memories, the longing brokenness, the wait… very intense…
Just Lovely π
Yonnieπππ
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Thank you!
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This speaks so eloquently of grief and longing. The last stanza is as fragile and gentle as the firelight, but it hit hard enough to bring tears. I would say I am sorry you felt this grief, but then I would have to also say I’m sorry you felt the powerful love that came before the loss. Thank you for sharing your heart. β₯.
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting.
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It was my sincere pleasure. I hope you have a beautiful week. β₯.
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You too!
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Lovely poetry, River! Really enjoyed this π
I was thinking of raising awareness of bloggers who write good short stories/poems, so might you recommend any flash-fiction writers/poets who you’ve enjoyed & could do with a larger audience?
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I’ll have to put some thought into that. There are a lot of great, underappreciated writers on here.
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This is so so beautiful! I absolutely loved it! π
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Thank you very much!
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