A free verse echo
Wrapped in tinder
Awaiting the flame
Of a lucid dream
Walls padded
Crippling overtones
Now cascade
To canyon walls
As the dam breaks
Revealing
The high watermark
Of creativity
Suppressed through
The self-realization
Of doubt and loathing
Like a pebble
Tossed into darkness
It makes no sound
Still, we are afraid
To let go, reach our hand
Into unforgiving silence
And sift through
The charred remains
Of forsaken flames
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Amazing
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Thank you.
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Breathtaking!
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Thank you!
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My pleasure always 🙂
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Beautiful.
Recently I’ve read so much about silence. It can be both soothing and terribly absenting.
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Thank you. That is very true.
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So beautiful. You have captured a space I seem unable to pull away from.
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Thank you, Susan.
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Beautiful
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Thank you.
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‘Still, we are afraid
To let go, reach our hand
Into unforgiving silence
And sift through
The charred remains
Of forsaken flames’
So much truth. So much one can relate to. In those words. I’m sure it speaks to a lot of people. You connect really well, with your readers. And the beauty of the poem?! Shines through all our forsaken flames.
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Thank you very much, Kat. I truly hope there are some people who can connect with my work.
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You’re welcome 🙂
I have no doubt they do!
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“Crippling overtones.” Brilliant, sad, coming of age. ~Kim
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Thanks, Kim. I really appreciate that.
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Outstanding imagery from start to finish!! Very well done.
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Thank you for the kind words, I really appreciate that.
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Going through forsaken flames !! I can see the past coming into the present but I try to keep it hidden behind those forsaken flames ! Very intriguing and stunning out look River !!
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Thank you for reading, my friend.
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You are welcome River. Great writing as always.
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I love the last couplet. Great piece.
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Thank you, Annie.
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You’re welcome.
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Wonderful. And hits me in a personal way, today. Always a pleasure, River!
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I appreciate that, Meg. Thank you.
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My pleasure!
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I love this but the letting to does take you into an ocean of love even thought its full of intense pain too ❤
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Very true. Thank you for reading.
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Lovely
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Thank you!
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Wow! You are such a talented and creative writer River :O) x
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That’s kind of you to say, thank you.
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“The self-realization
Of doubt and loathing”
“Still, we are afraid
To let go, reach our hand
Into unforgiving silence
And sift through
The charred remains”
This is as beautiful as it is true❤
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Thank you very much for reading!
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This poem has much depth, it gave me chills in a good way, it’s really great!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome River!
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Very nice work. Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you for reading!
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You’re welcome
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Excellent
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Thank you!
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Thank u too
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Great poem!
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Thank you!
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🙂
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Damn, River! This one pierces my hidden self.
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Thank you!
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Such a gift!!!
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Btw, do you use instagram?
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No, I’ve never had an account on there. Do you?
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Yeah I do. I was just going to look at yours for advice. But also your blog seems to be much more successful than mine. Your content is great obviously, but there are bloggers with thousands of followers who don’t get as much traffic as you do. How do you do it? Maybe I’m just not as talented. Anyway. Hope you are well.
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I’m not sure, I don’t do much beyond post once or twice a week. I read a lot of other blogs. I doubt it really has anything to do with talent or lack of talent.
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Nice one.
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Thank you.
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You are welcome.
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Wow, It touched me deeply, and now I’m sinking into thought about creativity.
Truly amazing.
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Thank you, I really appreciate that.
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Sobering… cuts through the things we hide in… powerful
Just came across your blog.. look forward to more reading..
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you reading!
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Beautifully written and expressed. Just Lovely! 😊🙏💜
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I appreciate that, thank you!
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Loved it, such a beautiful read 🙂
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Thank you.
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My pleasure 😊
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Oh, this is marvellous.
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Thank you for taking the time to read my work.
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Sure.
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These are the lines that resonate with me most. As the dam breaks
Revealing
The high watermark
Of creativity
Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for reading!
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This is a powerful read – really had an impact. Thanks for sharing!
I am a Creative Life Coach with a passion for poetry and here is today’s post in case you have time for a read? https://peacockpoetryblog.wordpress.com/2019/01/21/getting-better-everyday/
Am also on Instagram #coachingcreatively in case you use this form of social media?
Have a good Monday! Sam 🙂
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Thank you, I’ll check out your blog.
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Thanks it makes a difference
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I like it!
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Thank you.
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Such a densely rich piece. Stunning.
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Thank you for reading my work!
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My pleasure! Thank you so much for reading mine!
I haven’t been around much the last two months, so I am way behind on reading 🙂
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It’s nice to see you around again.
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Thank you! That’s kind
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You’re welcome.
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