It’s through shallow eyes
And loose fingers
Which you grip the world
So much easier
To slip
Through my icy embrace
Than to accept
For a moment
My silence is not
For nothing
You see it
As sin
When I keep walking
Stepping over, on
And around
Peering with vacant eyes
And gnarled claws
With which to throttle the void
Choosing to fall
Into that frozen stare
To rage in defiance
For all of time
Against the accursed silence
The sinful blanket
That smothers
Threatening to walk away
Flee then coward
Avoidance a tool
In which to punish
The world
This piece was written with Mike from Mike's Manic Word Depot
If you haven't yet read any of his work, I would recommend you stop
by his blog and check it out. He is certainly one of the greater
talents here on WordPress, and beyond. A master of confessional
poetry and prose. Mike also has a book being released on March 1st
called NOTCHES. Keep an eye out for that.
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Thank you!
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welcome 🙂
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Nicely done.
Silence is so inspirational.
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Yes, it is. Thank you.
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Fabulous 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Thanks.
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😊
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This is a perfect mesh of voices! Beautifully done!
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Thank you. Mike is quite the voice, his work is impressive.
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Good work!
Avoidance a tool
In which to punish
The world
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Thank you!
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You are welcome. One of the best things I read today.
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Very nice!:)
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Thank you, Stella.
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It was a pleasure!
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❤️
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Thanks for reading.
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in those moments when time stands as eternity
well done
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Thank you.
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There’s a lot of power in this poem.
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Thank you very much.
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Ohmygosh. You guys work awesome together! I love this piece. (I’m gonna leave the same comment on his site so he can see how I feel about it there.) 💕
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Thanks, Tara. Mike is awesome.
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You can’t disappoint with your verses and this collaboration is a proof you are able to adapt and add a lot to poetry. Salute Commander. You’ve done it again.
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Thanks man, I really appreciate that.
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I trusted your judgment and was not disappointed: Mike is phenomenal, too. Thanks for that recommendation. It’s so exciting to me when I discover such talented writers like you two. (: Well-matched collab!
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Yeah, he’s good. I love how honest and self-exposing his work is.
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After digesting your latest poetic dish: I’m glad you exist. Your writing (and stable author presence) rejuvenates me as a writer when I’m unstable and feel like quitting (never from block: my muses flood the place.) It reminds me that I love this, being a reader and writer, and I need to try even harder to not run away from it because of the emotions I don’t want to deal with that arise as byproduct. You writing, you doing all this, really matters. It mattered in a timely way for me again today. Thank you. (I’m not comfortable commenting on others’ blogs because I lose the power of the recall/delete button, but it was important to me to let you know you make a difference by using your talents.)
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Thank you, this really touched me. If we can all connect with and feed off one another’s creative energy, then in my opinion, we have all succeeded. I have always failed with the spoken word, so to hear that my written words have served a purpose; well, that is all I could ever hope for.
I’m not much for leaving comments either, I never feel like I have anything intelligent to offer, but thank you for taking the time to leave this comment.
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This is great, River! The thought of collaborating with someone on a poem seems daunting to me, but you and Mike managed to construct verses that fit quite well together.
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Thank you. Mike was very easy to work with, it was quick and painless.
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That’s good to hear!
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Nicely put together.
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Thank you very much.
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Loved it.. it’s great to see how a simple message can be delivered with impact through minimal word counts..
Great work..
Regards
Dee Kay
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Thank you, I appreciate that.
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You are welcome mate 😊
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Cool post.
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Thanks.
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I read some of your posts today.
Wow! So awesome with intense stuffs from your mind. I wish I have your heart.
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I really appreciate the kind words, thank you for reading my work.
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His work is quite impressive.
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He’s one of my favorites.
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