There is a walk I know, among the trees
How much you always loved the solitude
The dry, fallen leaves cracking beneath our feet
An overcast afternoon, fleeting warmth as the sun
Wove through the clouds overhead
The fall colors, which you couldn’t stop talking about
You always had a way of looking at things
As if for the first time
We’d sit there, beside the creek
Because there’s always a creek in my dreams
Sipping water, eating grapes, maybe strawberries
As you reach in your backpack
Surprise me with a chunk of banana bread
You made the night before, for our special day
A simple reminder, to never let go of these moments
Because for all the broken promises, things left unsaid
This is all that really matters in the end
A walk in the woods, sitting by a creek on a fall afternoon
Eating smashed banana bread with the person you love
I reach down and pick up a small rock, remembering
Turning it between my fingers, before tossing it into the creek
Saying goodbye to you, one more time
As the wind carries your memory away from me
And from this, our place
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Thanks, Mike.
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Made me tear up just a bit…
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Like stepping on a Lego . . .
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Yeah, but with less swearing…
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The wind carries her home, collects all of her essence, and spirits it away for work must be done. She will be remade. She will be reborn. She will be upgraded and perfected in force or form.
Eep, you weren’t supposed to noticed our workings here behind the scenes. Shit. Do … do we … take him too? Quick, get that stone.. smash it into his skull! Now fly away fly away!
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Thanks for the comment.
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Beautifully poignant, lovely nostalgic images River.
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome
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Lovely write my friend 💜🌼
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Thank you, Jen.
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You’re very welcome 😊
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memories and scars are friends to each other, entirely objective in nature and subjective to those who carry them
these doors are kept closed, yet seem to open of their own volition ….speaking personally of course
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Thank you for reading, Mark.
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Poems such as this one sustain peace, poetry, sanity…even civil-ization.
Lovely in every sense!
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Thank you so much!
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Lovely I really enjoyed reading this 💕
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome 😇
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I love the way you intertwined past and present. The image of ”eating smashed banana bread” made me smile. 😊
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Thank you very much for reading!
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Bloody hell…
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Thank you.
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This is a story in itself, River. I can feel the solitude, the memories, the breeze on my skin and the bereavement of a lost love. As always, you craft the words into such beautiful imagery, and I particularly love this poem because you describe my perfect afternoon out – simple, quiet and wooded bliss. 🙂
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I really appreciate that, Alli. Thank you for the kind words.
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Plunge the knife in deeper. Why don’t you?
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At least I didn’t twist it.
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Indeed. Very merciful of you.
Great emotions in this piece.
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Thank you.
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Brought tears!! I think the true essence of poetry is to make the reader feel something; job well done.
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Thank you, Michael. That means a lot to me.
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So beautiful …
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Thank you, Luisa.
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Exquisite words. What a beautiful reverie.
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Thank you!
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Superbly written, and I felt the emotions , yes I cried……..
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Thank you for reading, Ivor.
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Wonderful poem. Smooth as butter.
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Thank you very much!
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I love the imagery in this especially the line “As the wind carries your memory away from me”…beautiful.
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Thank you very much for reading!
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You’re welcome.
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It always astounds me how the simplest moments and memories can have so much power. The force of emotions they can produce. It is a skilled writer who can create something so remarkable out of a simple idea. This was beautiful and brimming with nostalgia. I loved every word and every line 🙂
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Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave such a thoughtful comment.
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My pleasure 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you.
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My pleasure 💚
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Oh my gosh…beautiful! Ugh, painful, but beautiful 🙂
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Thank you very much!
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Always my pleasure!
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Ah man River, this one hurt – in a good way. The scene you described in the woods was so perfect, what a shame it couldn’t last.
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Thanks a lot, Josh.
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No problem!
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River this is captivating, every word lingering as you reading it. “Our Place” is absolutely romantic, a perfect moment colorfully painted, in time. Absolute Brilliant
-Yonnie
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Thank you very much, Yonnie.
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You are quite welcome, River!
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You are a great writer.
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That’s kind of you to say, thank you.
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My pleasure.
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you!
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Sad, but beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you, Desiree.
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Beautiful words, River 🙂
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Thank you!
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You write of loss with a deep understanding of it River. Beautiful.
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Thank you.
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I liked the images. Lovely.
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Thank you, Bojana.
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I can feel it!
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Thank you for reading!
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You have a way with imagery, River! It’s always a joy to read your works.
I just have one question: which is heavier, the rock he throws or his heart?
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Thank you for reading.
That is a very good question, one I would have to think about, and likely never be able to answer.
Maybe, he feels with each pebble tossed, he is leaving a part of the heaviness behind. As if that was possible.
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Why shouldn’t it be possible? 🙂
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I suppose anything is.
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This more so than most other things 🙂
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Good question by Agyani. I loved this too.
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Thank you very much!
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enjoyed your bitter
sweet reflection 🙂
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Thank you.
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River you write the most compelling pieces I think I’ve ever had the pleasure of reading. The emotion you convey is absolutely riveting and you really know how to keep the readers attention.
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Thank you for the kind words.
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Wow, as I read your poems, I felt that they were dedicated to me. Wonderful, written with love. Thank you for giving us the opportunity to read your fantastic poems. Have a nice Sunday. Greetings, Balle 🤗
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Thank you very much for the kind words, Balle.
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Such a charming poem River – wonderful imagery :O) x
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Thank you.
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Beautifully written! The imagery used really enhances it. Fantastic job!
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Thank you very much.
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This is definitely one of my favorite posts you’ve made. Breathtaking.
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I really appreciate that, thank you.
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Love the pic
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Thank you.
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Reblogged this on House of Heart and commented:
Beautiful poetry …
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Thank you for the reblog.
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My pleasure!
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Wow! Really fabulous. Thank you!
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And thank you for reading!
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Thank you for reading!
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A wonderful masterpiece of romantic memories and yearnings, My Friend!! Thanks so much for sharing this!!! Bellissimo!!
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Thank you very much for reading!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you for the reblog.
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Happy to read and share your post with followers, My Friend!
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Wow, this description took me there. A beautiful poem!
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Thank you!
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Lovely and emotional – sadness, yearning memories so beautifully penned.
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Thank you for reading.
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My pleasure!
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Amazing thoughts. 🙂
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Thank you!
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This is very beautiful River
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Thank you, Nitin.
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I really like this. It speaks to me.
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Thank you, that means a lot to me.
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This brought tears to my eyes. A beautiful sad and powerful poem my friend.
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Thank you, Walt.
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My pleasure River.
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