A jar of coins
Set aside for another day
Corner of a dresser
Where once sat
A woman’s brush
In its place, now
A layer of dust
Telling a tale
Of lost love, when love
Was not enough
If only we had taken
The time to stand still
Even once
In the open courtyards
Beyond the barred windows
And barricaded doorways
We would have seen
There is no greener grass
Than that which grows
Beneath our feet
And still grows, to this day
Even when we see only dirt
Upon which to stand
A Jar of Coins

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Beautiful.
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Thank you very much.
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Count your blessings and appreciate what you have. A wonderful sentiment.
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Couldn’t agree more.
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Love this.
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Thank you, Kelly.
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Very welcome, River.
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Fabulous!
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Thanks, Rita.
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My pleasure.
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Yes – I’ve got a jar like that, even though there’s nothing in it…
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Same here, my kid raids it.
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I love the message this sends
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Thank you.
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This was wonderful. I hope you don’t mind if I link this to a future post of ‘The week that was in my digital-world’ . Cheers River. You’re a great talent.
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Thank you and I don’t mind at all. I greatly appreciate when someone shares my work. Thank you for asking.
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Gr8..melancholic lines..
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Thank you, Diana.
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Fantastic poem, River. A perfect illustration of our tendency not to fully appreciate what we’ve got until it’s gone. I love the allusions to dust and grass, both growing over time. Real lump-in-the-throat stuff. Love it. 🙂
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Thank you, Alli. I always appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
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I’ll always find the time for your work, River. It’s exceptional. 🙂
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wonderful and beautiful poem
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Thank you, Judy.
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You’re welcome River, it was a pleasure to read your poem.
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Very nice work
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Thank you.
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Thank you for the reblog!
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There you go again blowing dust from day…
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Trying. Thank you for reading!
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Great sentiment River. I love the transition from the specific to the general. Brilliant! 🙂
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Thank you very much.
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So so true. Beautifully penned, River.
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Thanks, Bojana.
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New here. Liked this. 🙂
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I appreciate that, thank you. I just came across your blog and look forward to reading more of your work.
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Can I just say, your writing never ceases to draw me in and amaze me with its beautiful, lyrical, haunting quality. I’m a fan!!
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That’s very kind of you to say, thank you.
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River, that is such a beautiful piece! It really touched my heart!!!
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Thank you so much.
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I always enjoy reading your work. Your words paint a vivid picture.
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Thank you!
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So beautifully expressed. Love this one!
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Thanks, Meg.
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You ended strongly yet again…
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Thank you.
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Very well said!
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Thank you!
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This was very well done!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome.
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Reblogged this on Diary of a would-be novelist and commented:
Being busy with work and other stuff means I’m not blogging much at the moment. When I can, I’m writing in my notebook and working on projects. I’m also still enjoying reading other people’s blogs for pleasure and for inspiration. One of my favourites is River Dixon’s The Stories In Between.
Here is a recent poem from River’s blog. Go check it out.
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Beautiful sentiments – I’ve reblogged it.
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Thank you very much for the reblog!
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Wonderful…
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Thank you.
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Oh how i have missed your words
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Thanks, nice to see you around again.
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Thank you…. It feels good to be back
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Your words have touched my heart. Thank you.
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You’re welcome, and thank you for the kind comment.
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I beautifully gleaming description, River.
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Thanks, Scott.
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You are welcome!
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I love this!
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Thanks, Winnie.
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You’re welcome.
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This is so beautiful it touched my soul 💜
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Thank you very much.
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💜😃
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Beautifully stirring writing as always River!
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Thank you.
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You’re very welcome, my pleasure
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You should always be grateful for what you have before it becomes what you had! Great poem 🙂
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Very true, thank you.
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Great
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Thank you.
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This is lovely, absolutely beautifully expressed and true. Many times we miss love. and cherished moments. Chasing wind and thoughts ideas is greener on the other side.
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Thank you, Yonnie.
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You are certainly welcome 🙏
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I’d like to find a jar with coins, preferably with genie 🧞♀️ but some gold would do wonders…for self-publishing Journey 🙂
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Hey, Ray! Nice to see you.
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Wonderful poem …so #pro! Well done 👍
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Thank you!
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So sweet and painful. Wonderfully done. Nice to read you again x
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Thank you!
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This hurt to read. So beautiful ❤️ Love your writing!
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Thank you, Stephanie.
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Sad but enchanting!
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Thank you.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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