I may smile at you
But it stops there
I don’t have much
To give you
Some words
Nothing much at all
There are spaces between
The cracks in this shell
If you look through
They are warm and pleading
For a hand to grasp
To pull me from this place
I don’t ask for salvation
For it is mine to find
But if you have more to offer
Than a moment
I may accept your hand
With the intent
To do you no harm
For there are things to be broken
And together
We can destroy this place
Build something
New
From this
But if not
Then offer, perhaps
Just a smile in return
And we will pass by
As strangers
The way it has always been
So generous 😇
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Thank you!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Rita.
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This one shines with soul. so fine!!
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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Amazing, River. ❤
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Thanks, Penny.
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One smile… One stare… One moment. I get it 🙂
Lovely piece …
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It only takes a moment to change a life.
Thanks for reading.
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You are most welcome, River…
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And one said, a stranger is just another unknown friend, its a great writing
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Very true, thank you very much.
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The destroying place verse I’m still perplexed about since it juxtaposes the rest.. It’s a wonderful poem
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Thank you very much for reading!
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Beautifully written.
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Thank you.
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This one stole me heart. Simple words, deep meaning.
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Thank you very much!
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I felt as if you were talking to me! Wonderful piece, very personal! Thank you for sharing!!
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Thank you!
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Very nice River!
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Thanks.
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You’re welcome.
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Very heartfelt! ❤
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Thank you!
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Wow! This poem was excellent and so full of emotion! Great poem River!
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Thank you.
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What should I say? Ecstatic? Or heartbreaking?
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Both. That’s life I suppose.
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Sometimes a few words can be worth more than materialistic things. Words have the ability to touch the soul. Great poem 🙂
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Very true. Thank you for reading.
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Awesome..
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Thank you.
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Reblogged this on Becoming is Superior to Being and commented:
Life is all about the stories in between that often fall through the cracks.
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Thanks for the reblog, I appreciate that.
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A simple smile can change someone’s day. I love this 💗
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Thank you very much.
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You are so patient with your own impatience~ I hope you have been well?
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I’m good. And you?
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I’m doing really well. Now. I had a torn rotator cuff though, from sailing – It’s much better now, but the pain was bleh lol .
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That sounds unpleasant, glad to hear you are feeling better.
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A generous poetic invitation.
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Thank you, Ali.
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Beautiful 😍😍😍😍😍
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Thank you very much!
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Wow, there’s a lot in here! And a very moving melancholy.
Social media is complex, isn’t it, the way we connect but also don’t?
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Social media is certainly a strange beast. I only use WordPress though, which I have to say is a pretty positive place. I tried Twitter for a couple of months but the negativity there is something I don’t want to be a part of.
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Yes, I am mostly WP too…I have such a love/hate thing with FB… their ethics are so appalling, but there are too many people I know who only really stay in touch through it. I’m still trying to figure out what to do about that. I actually deleted my FB months ago, then when I went to change my messenger password, it took me straight to my FB account! Even though it said I could use messenger without it! Ugh!
I’ve never tried Twitter, but what you have said is consistent with other things i have heard.
I’m so cynical of all of this data mining that goes on, and how valuable it has become…
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A subtle feel and nice way to propose someone you like.
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Thank you very much for reading!
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You gave it quite a turning end.
You expressed the emotions beautifully 💚
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Thank you very much!
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River this is absolutely lovely and beautifully written. The transparency is so vivid. There is a deep sense of honor, love and longevity. 😇🌟
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Thank you so much, Yonnie.
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You are certainly welcome, River.
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I feel this poem. It’s real.
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Thank you.
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You are welcome.
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just a smile… and then a shot – in the head! that how it feels haha
No, just kidding 😜 well done!
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Or a kick in the throat.
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Kung fu 🥋 yay 😃
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Ugh! Genius! You’ve done it again, well said. I always find myself in that we’re both going left, no go right, no left, thanks for the dance shuffle!
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Thank you very much, David.
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Thanks for another share, it’s greatly appreciated!
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It makes me think of how so often we are nothing more than two ships passing in the night, but each of us holds such a deep and vivid world within us. So close, but yet so far away..
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Yes, exactly. Very insightful.
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so unobtrosive, but sad and suddenly an assertive stance but ultimately, allowing freedom to take hold.
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read my work.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Beautiful ❤ I often wonder whether a stranger would look into someone’s soul and connect with the person intimately. All I can see is humanoids sleepwalking around me 😁
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It does seem like a lot of us are sleepwalking, doesn’t it?
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Yes absolutely!
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