I can hold you In my arms And tell you All the lies You've been longing To hear And mean Every word I say Because those lies Are the same lies I've been dreaming Of, for so long And we'll lose Ourselves In blind Blissful Ignorance![]()
This piece is included in my poetry collection COLDER, available at Amazon.
Hold me. Look me in the eyes and tell me you love me, how I adore our beautiful lies.
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Exactly. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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A great illustration of how we want “the truth”, yet it is only specific “truths” that we REALLY want to hear.
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Oh yeah. The truth generally sucks, I don’t want any part of that!
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Eventually we start believing our own lies and mistaking them for the truths. I very much loved this piece today! Especially,
“And mean
Every word
I say
Because those lies
Are the same lies
I’ve been dreaming
Of, for so long”
Thanks for the share! ~K
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Thank you, your feedback means a lot to me.
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Blissful ignorance….Lovely💐
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It’s the only way to fly!
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Agree👍
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A gorgeous writing! So intricate, and the juxtaposition skillfully used;
lies/blissful ignorance while the lovers are longing, dreaming apparently the same dream.
Exquisite!
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Thank you very much for the kind words.
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You are welcome 🙂
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Breathtakingly beautiful and true.
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I apperciate that, thank you.
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awesome.
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Thank you.
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Beautiful.. reminds me of the lines by Shakespeare “Therefore I lie with her and she with me, And in our faults by lies we flatter’d be.”
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I really appreciate that, thank you.
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🙃
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There’s a lot to be said for blissful ignorance; beautifully expressed as always 😊 xx
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Yes there is. Thank you for reading.
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lies and twisted truth so beautifully written here, only lovers know this desperate language
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Thank you for reading Gina.
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Oh, I wish I could write this way. So good, my friend. A true life delight to read.
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Thank you Rita, I am happy you like it.
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I’m just so in awe of the gift.
BTW, I went to the Great Sand Dunes National Park Saturday and thought of you looking at this magnificent space.
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I’m jealous. I’ve never been there but it looks amazing.
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It’s a bit overwhelming. There were done backpackers planning to camp overnight there. I can only imagine how beautiful and surreal it would be at night.
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I love this.
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Thanks.
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Oh…E
I can easily say, this is my favourite piece I’ve ever read of yours.
It’s INCREDIBLY romantic, but a little dangerous and a little scary in a way just because we want so badly to be told certain sweet, hot things and we wish and plead that they are not lies but still…
I am rambling and predict you will answer me with your usual thank you, lol.
Just know you touched me with this one
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Thank you.
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Some of the times I’ve spent in blissful ignorance have been the best times of my life.
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Yep…same here
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Ha – cynical but sweet. 🙂
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Thank you.
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Wow…….. amazing…………..what I should say this whether the beauty of lies or a way to get rid of ugly truths…………
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
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Reblogged this on Holy Whore and commented:
Beautiful!
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Thank you for the reblog.
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So, your lies are truths? I like this, as it holds dichotomies.
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Thank you very much.
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Woooow. This is my favourite poem from you, honestly, I love it. I love love it. I can relate to this, it’s as if I’m reciting this for myself. 😦
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Thank you, that means a lot to me. It’s nice when people can relate through words.
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I can totally relate to this, darling. Very much so.
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Thanks.
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Very nicely done. Its rare when dreams line up together and you can hide in blissful ignorance.
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Yes it is. Thank you for reading!
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You’re welcome!
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Great ending–the last five lines end with a punch.
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Thank you.
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Gorgeous poetry
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Thank you for reading.
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🤗🤗🤗
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Oh..wow💗
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on Antonella Lallo.
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Thank you for the reblog.
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Sometimes we would rather live in blissful pretend ignorance than face the painful realities of life. Because when we do face the hurtful truth, we end up being shattered into pieces :,)
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Very true, I agree.
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Wise truth, beautifully written quite expressive. Great visual graphic enhances your words.
Yonnie💜🌸
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Thank you, Yonnie.
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Great read for my Rain Forest. You are welcome 🙏
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ya so I say very little =)
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Yeah, just go with it.
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Beautifully tragic, a perfect summation of the book’s entire theme 💯
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Thank you!
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you know how to pull the tears to flow….(hugs if my dreams meant anything) lol….
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Thank you very much.
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Awesome..simple but very deep and magical
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Thank you, Diana.
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Love this. I am reading “Colder” right now.
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I saw! Thank you!
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Beautifully true 🙏
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Thank you, Raquel.
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I really like that and so very true.
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Thank you, Catherine.
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Beautiful, love your writing. Also, I have purchased your book 🙂
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That was very kind of you, thanks so much!
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This is painfully beautiful!
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Thank you very much!
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This is one of my faviorite pieces so far!
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Thank you so much, Jocy.
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Ain’t that the truth!
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Often, yes. Thank you for reading!
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Nice one
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Thanks, I’ll check it out.
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Beautiful ❤
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Thank you!
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That won’t last long once she has to scrape his underwear off the wall. LOL. I dunno. You know me, I like the truth, even if it’s painful.
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I’m relieved to say I have never needed to have my underwear scraped from the wall. Or, perhaps I’m missing out on something.
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Hahaha. Knock it off the wall with a broom. I also found a sock under the stove once. It kind of shatters the illusion of delusion. 😀 😀 😀 😀
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I really liked your poem a lot. I made me think. Sometimes I tend to overthink, but it was beautifully written.
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Thank you!
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Sometimes we blur the lines between truth and lies we lie so often that is transcends into our shared reality having said that it was amazing and I’d really appreciate your feedback on some of my content. Regards.
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Thank you. Sure, I’ll check out your blog.
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This is one of my favorites, from Colder. It has such a vivid expression. A plea, “Tell the truth, tell no lies.
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Thanks, Yonnie!
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You are certainly welcome.
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Loved this, My Friend!! Especially the lines – “And tell you
All the lies
You’ve been longing
To hear
Sometimes the truth is more cruel than a tender lie!! And the heart wants what the heart wants knowing the risks and knowing the lies?????✨✨👍😊
Bravo, River!!
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Thank you very much.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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It has taken quite a while to visit, but it’s clear I certainly will step in here or frequently.
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Thanks. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
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