I have seen an old woman
Sitting in a rocking chair
The warmth of the desert sun
Shining on her through the front window
Surrounded by her children, grandchildren
Great grandchildren, friends
The smile on her face as she basked in the beauty of her life’s work
In her eyes, not a glimmer of regret
For none of this could be, if not for her
I have seen an urn, flanked with flowers, purple and sun
A pastor weaving scripture of hope, love and God
Images of a life lived in faith and purpose
Trembling to the words of hallelujah
They find peace in the knowing
For every breath, every step taken
She will be by their side
And in the eyes of those who remain
Is found, a reflection of her
I have seen an empty rocking chair
The warmth of the desert sun
Shining through the front window
Surrounded by children, grandchildren
Great grandchildren, friends
A circle which cannot be broken
For a love which is shared
Is not bound by flesh, bone or earth
It is a love eternal
This and other poems can be found in my collection COLDER
Oh my goodness…SO beautiful!
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Thank you, I really appreciate that.
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Beautiful imagery, this.
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Thank you for reading.
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Lovely indeed sir
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A moving story in verse, and a tribute to those who quietly make a difference.
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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I haven’t see a poem this good in a while. The motives are colorful and striking in a way where you can graphically form an image. Stunning. 😀 Bravo Commander. 😀
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Thank you my friend.
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Oh woowww. This is really sth.
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Beautiful meditation on life and death and how loved ones from either realm can be equally close.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work.
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Aw, beautiful poem!
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Thank you!
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As is often the case, this poem sent shivers of thought and feelinga down my frame as I reached the conclusion. This is beautiful.
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Thank you very much for the kind words. Your feedback is always appreciated.
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Simply beautiful – the circle continues.
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Thank you very much.
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How beautiful you depicted the life of the old woman, even after death.
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Thank you very much for the kind words.
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You are welcome.
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Love it 💕💕👍 well done! 👏
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Beautiful – reminded me of my Nan. Thank you
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You are welcome, thank you for reading.
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This is so beautiful!
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Thank you, that means a lot to me.
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This is deep and powerful.
The light of grace within.
Go forth and multiply
such glorious writing.
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Why thank you, I appreciate the kind verse.
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Awesome
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Thank you!
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Wow!!! This is amazing… I may be a fly on the wall on this one. Or maybe a you are seeing through a Chrystal ball. Good job.
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Thank you very much. No crystal ball, you must be the fly.
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You’re welcome!
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This is such a wonderful poem and something I needed to read…especially today.
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you got something out of my writing but I am sorry if you are having a difficult time.
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Thank you so much for your concern. Tomorrow is looking to be a better day.
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It will be.
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Awesome!!!!!!
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dat’s good. 🙂
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How lovely! And beautifully crafted.
And the photo is perfect. 🙂
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I appreciate that very much, thank you.
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You’re welcome!
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Thank you, I will check out your blog.
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So Beautiful things that you’ve seen!
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Thank you!
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This is incredibly beautiful! A perfect picture of the beauty that can come through grief. Lovely in both language and feeling.
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you reading!
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That gave me goosebumps! Amazing!
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Thank you very much. I am enjoying your blog, you have some incredible work.
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Oh my!! This is just amazing.. I love your poetry 💕
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Thank you Tracy, that is very kind of you.
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Wow! Beautifully penned!
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Thank you for reading.
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Grabbed my heart. Fantastic! ❤️
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Thank you very much.
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Beautifully written! 😊
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on Ionwhite Poetry and commented:
This is eternal and beautiful truth
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Thank you so much for the reblog, that means a lot to me.
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eternal and beautiful truth spoken here I see!
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Thank you for the kind words.
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This made me cry. Really lovely. 🙃
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Thank you very much for reading, that means a lot to me.
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Reblogged this on Pointed Home and commented:
A beautiful poem about the love of family.
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Thank you very much for the reblog, it is much appreciated.
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You are so very welcome, your writing is fantastic. I hope many more find your words and are inspired!
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Great stuff
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Beautiful poem, made stronger by so many wonderful images. Children are our greatest legacy, if they are raised right, with love and guidance.
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Thank you sir, I really appreciate your comment.
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This is a beautiful piece.
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Thank you very much for the kind words, they are appreciated.
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Beautiful.. Reminded me of my late grandma.. She left us four years back but we still feel her very close to us.. Present in every moment of our life… Thank you for this.. ❤
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Thank you. I wrote this for my wife’s grandmother who recently passed. She was a beautiful person as I’m sure was your grandma.
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It’s beautiful. Loved it
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Thank you so much.
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My pleasure
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powerful Kaddish i felt the gentle electricity of soul transcending rarely do i get to see our elders paid tribute in this manner thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome. Thank you for reading and for the kind words.
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Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! ❤
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Thank you, Penny!
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So sad and yet so beautiful.
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Thank you.
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River, this is magnificent. I hope to be that woman someday.
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Thank you, Rita. I think we all do.
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😊
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Couldn’t help but smile while reading this..
Wonderful ❤️❤️❤️
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Soulful and truly beautiful!
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Thank you!
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River this is beyond beautiful. It is has a magic to it, a healing power. Love truly is eternal. It never dies. ∞
♥.
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Thank you very much, Niki.
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You’re very welcome dear River. =)
♥.
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This is breathtakingly beautiful, River! It reminded me of my mother, surrounded by her sixteen children, and 50 (and counting!) grandchildren. None of it could be, if not for her.
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Thank you very much for reading. And wow, that’s a lot of grandkids!
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Such a powerful and moving poem, a beautiful tribute to the elderly and the connections of family. And just so, so, beautifully written. Wow.
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate that.
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I just read this again, and honestly, this is so moving. That empty rocking chair but surrounded by her family, her legacy, her own view of that, no regrets. The urn, the hallelujah chorus. It’s just… perfect. It’s death as it should be, if there is such a thing, a life lived with purpose, celebrated and continued with those that carry her legacy and memories. The circle of life.
I just love this.
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Thank you again. This piece came to me from a moment of clarity while surrounded by profound sadness. I looked around the room and thought about how many of those people would not even exist if it wasn’t for that woman’s life. How different would that room have looked if she had even chosen to make one decision in her life differently. I think sometimes we forget what an impact, whAt a chain reaction our single, little life has on the world.
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This poem is like a balm for anyone who has lost someone, but also for each of us as we age. I really thank you for writing this, it warms my spirit.
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You paint a beautiful picture of a life well-lived. I love reading your poetry.
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Thank you so much!
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very nice! And Happy Halloween Riv! : )
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Thank you. And a Happy Halloween to you too!
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thanks!
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Absolutely beautiful.
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Thank you, Meg.
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