In between This, that and the other Lies A common ground Unseen, distorted Misunderstood Through a lens Of pseudo-virtue Good intentions Driven by fear And void Of tolerance Compassion Is the greatest test Of your life's worth And if from your Moral high ground You take it Upon yourself To label Certain people Unworthy Of your compassion Then that is a test You will fail Do not mistake My silence For indifference My path Is not yours Your lies Will never Be my truth Your intolerance Will never Be my way If you weren't So blind With anger You would see That high ground Which you March upon So proudly Is about To open up And swallow Everything You claim to Stand for
From my latest poetry collection, Left Waiting, available in eBook or paperback from Amazon.
Beautifully versed 👏
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Thank you.
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You are most welcome
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Absolutely love this one, River 💯 well said, well writ ✍️
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Thanks, Eric.
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This is a great message, River, especially right now.
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Thanks, Josh.
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No problem!
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Wonderful! ❤
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Thank you.
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I agree with you. There is an undistorted, objective truth that exists. The hard part is finding it and living life by it. Good writing!
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Very true. Thank you.
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River, you have caught intolerance and haughtyness with no words to spare. So strong and deeply touching.
Miriam
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Thank you very much, Miriam.
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You don’t normally do second person; but, you did it well, this time…
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Even a broken clock is right 2x a day.
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More often than one that is just five minutes slow, eh?
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Is it really 5 minutes slow or is the world just 5 minutes too fast?
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Superb message, River. As a mother of an autistic child, I’ve had years of intolerance and haughtiness from judgemental people who have no idea what they’re actually judging. It’s a tough world for those outside the norm, so I love this poem that shines a light on a better way. I hope people learn from it. 🙂
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Seems like there is more than enough intolerance to go around.
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Too right. The world’s riddled with it.
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Still though, the world is filled with a lot of good people. I try not to forget that.
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This is true. And thank heavens for them. 😊
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Yes indeed….i remember those people who had nothing but badness to speak and their thoughts became ur life all of a sudden…who will break u and leave u there to rot…no care and soooo many who had these opinions….the darkness came and left me there
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Sorry you’ve had these terrible experiences at the hands of intolerant others too. If it helps, over time, I learned to look at it in the way it really is – it’s they who are ignorant and badly behaved. They don’t know what they’re judging, and the problem is theirs, not ours. They don’t matter, and neither do their misguided opinions and empty words. Instead I listen to people who do matter, like River. His words are the ones to listen to. 😊
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Oh yes…that’s how I roll now…but then I was like a deer in headlites and couldn’t move…or let alone change anything or leave for the matter…what’s matters is I finally did leave eventually..and i am still that same that left and pretty much still am today…say what I mean and mean what I say🤗
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That’s the spirit! Well done. 🙂
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🥂
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Oh lord River …u should not like these and they should be taken away….sorry for the babbling
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No need to be sorry, I like when people interact in the comments.
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“Compassion
Is the greatest test
Of your life’s worth”
It is a choice we make each day to look to others with compassion or judgement.
This poem would be a great conversation starter.
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You are right. It is always our choice. Thanks, Ali.
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Bravo!
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Thanks!
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With you 100% — great photo too.
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Thank you. Perhaps I should have added a caption to the photo to be careful about what you read though.
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Hmm… that’s right too. There is such a thing as reading the wrong things.
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Beautiful words, beautiful reflection 🌸
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Thank you.
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Powerful!
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Thanks, Rita.
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😊
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A very intense poem, full of passion and ferocity. Well done 🙂
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Thank you very much.
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I really like this one.
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Thank you.
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true true
at some point we will realize that “high ground” is only something in the mind that we make up to console our consciences…it doesn’t matter who we are, we all do it
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You’re right, everyone does it; across the board.
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Definitely a strong piece. Although, I might try and argue about some of its content. One man’s high ground is another person’s plateau.
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Thanks. Feel free to voice any opinions.
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Then I shall.
1. Not saying anything/remaining silent is a balancing act. You might not want to get involved, and while you know you don’t necessarily agree with someone, it does not allow others to see that. Sometimes something needs to be said for people to pause and think and for things to potentially change. Of course, I agree that there is time and place for everything.
2. Regarding the moral high ground, because it’s something I’ve been discussion with another blogger for the past day or so:
We all have different experiences, which make us see things differently. Sometimes it’s right, sometimes it’s wrong, sometimes it’s just different. What is real to me does not have to apply to you and vice versa. Hence, if you think someone is on their high horse, they might not see it that way. They might think they are just sharing their opinion and experience. You have the ability to share yours. But why knock them off that horse? The horse can only exist in the perceiver’s mind. And that, in turn, can stall debate. Those perceptions of another human being standing on a soap box causes resentment. We hate to feel lower than others (horse, high ground, soapbox), so we try to knock them down. But sometimes I’d recommend just stopping and chatting with them. You might agree, you might disagree, but there is a chance that you will end the conversation on an equal footing, despite the outcome.
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1. I totally agree with your first point. What I was getting at in this piece is that people shouldn’t assume that just because I am not directly addressing something or “taking a side” than I am in support of the side they feel I should be speaking out against. That is lazy thinking and trying to use manipulation to shame someone into supporting their agenda. This is in reference to the fact I have received more than one communication from people who have told me that as a writer, I have a social responsibility to speak out against certain things. I don’t have a responsibility to anyone or anything. I will write whatever I feel like writing. If I ever have the drive to write something political, then I will. If I don’t, then I won’t. Simple as that.
2. Again, I agree with what you outline in #2. What I am referring to is when people use their definition of morality to justify their lack of compassion and demonization of other people. The whole mindset that if you don’t think exactly the way I do, then you are a bad person. It’s labeling and dehumanizing people who think differently than you to push one’s own agenda. I don’t like that. It can be difficult to dismiss a human being, but dismissing a label, well, that’s a lot easier. I see people being reduced from an individual to merely a member of a group. And if that group has been identified, based on your moral high ground as immoral/evil, then you can justifiably do whatever you want to do to that “person”. Similar to what you said, we have to be willing and open to listening to people who’s opinions differ from ours.
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ad. 1. Totally agreed. I’m rather surprised to hear that you’ve been told that. The nerve of some people.
ad. 2. Can’t argue with any of it.
Stay golden!
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Very insightful truth, River!!! Especially, loved the ending!!! Bravo!!
Chuck
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Thank you, Chuck.
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Masterfully written, River!!
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Compassion – so many preachers and so few practicing – well said 🙌
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Thank you very much for reading.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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you have a way of putting so much energy and power behind your words……..compassion is something we need more of in this world. so much is written and spoken about it, but few truly put it into practice.
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Thank you very much.
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it is truly my pleasure to read your work….
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Powerful and beautifully expressed River.
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Thank you, Yonnie.
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You are certainly welcome, River.
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Wonderful words River!
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Thank you.
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You are welcome.
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Finished reading “colder” on a road trip and absolutely loved it. left a review on amazon 🙂
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Thank you very much!
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My pleasure 🙂
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I liked the wisdom on the wall. My grandfather told me often River Dixon. Think before you speak, often.
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Great advice.
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So mindfully crafted!!😍💞
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Thank you very much.
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Great post.
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Thank you.
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Very interesting way of saying the truth, enjoyed it.
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Thank you very much.
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Wow! 😮 Have our paths unknowingly converged at some point? I swear I’ve been there.
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Maybe . . .
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“Pseudo-virtue”, sounds like self-righteousness…
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For sure. Thanks for reading.
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You’re welcome
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RAWR! Nicely done, River!
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Thanks, Susi.
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You’re very welcome, River!
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Well said.
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Thank you.
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Nice to meet you, River, through Penny Wilson’s blog. An excellent poem.
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Nice to meet you too, Roberta. Thanks for stopping by.
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