We don’t have boulevards to forget
Our dreams lie broken on dirty streets
Nicotine stained fingers prod for meaning
Calloused hands wring out the last
Drops of chance we believed were waiting
Don’t tell me about hope and the possibility
Of what may come
I see it, smell it all around me, the hope
It stares me in the face, around every corner
Hangs from light posts and street signs
Flows through the gutters like paper boats
Made from yesterday’s news
It’s been dropped, thrown, torn to pieces
Left, to drift on the wind
It’s stepped over, walked through, trampled on
Trapped in a cycle of rot and growth
Yes, there’s hope, it’s all around us
But how many are too tired to stop and pick it up
Too weak to carry it, along with everything else
That fills their arms, lives on their backs
Sometimes, we manage to tuck some away
A fragment here, a fragment there, hope
Left waiting, as we check an empty pocket
For the moment to present itself, maybe tomorrow
Will it still be there, whispering through footsteps
Trying to keep up, crying out to the forgotten
As it fades to black, accepting its fate
To fertilize one broken, one forsaken, one wrong
Path after another, as their polished boulevards
Gleam passively in the distance
From my poetry collection, Left Waiting, available from Amazon.
Yes!
Just strolling …
…… like
down, Spot, down
that boulevard
of broken,
forsaken,
lost dreams!
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Thanks for reading!
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“But how many are too tired to stop and pick it up
Too weak to carry it, along with everything else”
Yes. This. I understand.
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Thank you very much for reading.
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Beautiful, River! I felt it in my heart.
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Thank you very much!
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Hi River
Very powerful verse – palpable feeling of despair. It’s there in every city, town, village – turn right or left and there is a street that is the mirror opposite of the well-heeled areas. The boulevards are often the walls between rich and poor – bastions of privilege – well that’s the old European model.
I’m happy to have bought your 2 books of poetry a while back – well-worth the outlay.
Cheers
Steve
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Thanks a lot, Steve.
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Hit me right in the feels.
Great descriptions. It made me feel like I was a smoker.
“Don’t tell me about hope and the possibility” was particularly sound to me. It’s easy to utter cliches.
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Yeah, it’s always easier said than done. Thanks, Sam.
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Powerful.
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Thank you.
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I loved how this piece flowed, the imagery is so powerful!
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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Hope… it’s so profound, how you describe it. Makes me think of my words. The ones I can’t seem to discharge out of my convoluted mind.
Beautiful.
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I understand the feeling. Words are stubborn sometimes.
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Not many.
Gorgeous read, River. Very emotional and thought-provoking at the same time.
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Thank you, Bojana!
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Hope is only in the mind like so many other things…is it even real?
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Not to sound cheesy, but I think only if you believe in it. Which isn’t always an easy thing to do.
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wow. Weighty. Beautifully penned, River. ❤
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Thank you, Penny.
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I’d say ‘buy the book’ – don’t be left waiting – take it all in – along with all the others – stand out poem, River.
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Thanks a lot, Eric. By the way, to anyone reading the comments, Eric has a book coming out this summer. I’ve read it. It’s great.
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Hi Eric
Too true about Left Waiting.
And I look forward to buying your new book, as long as it isn’t madly expensive. I like your poem Imagined Real – captures the beauty of travelling by train in the UK – OK if you can afford first class. I felt the sense of train motion in the opening 2 stanzas – either that or it’s vertigo. Great humour in your poems – it’s disarming, and you can get away with murder if you make the reader engage with you in looking at the droll side of life.
Cheers
Steve (West Midlands)
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Hi Steve – thank you very much for your comment and email – good to know I could get away with murder! I’ll follow up by email. All the best. Eric (Bucks, Devon raised, Birmingham born)
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River, this was a riveting read. Powerful writing there!
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Thank you very much.
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This touched all the senses, a very moving poem River.
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I appreciate that very much, thank you.
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So beautiful!
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Thank you.
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How appropriate for how one feels …after watching ‘ppl’ lie and lie…on public TV
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For sure. Thanks for reading.
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I can see Philip Marlowe mumbling those words…
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Ah, yes, that is fitting.
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A searing verse that’s a true bolt between the eyes, River. I love the idea of hope as something we can all carry with us but don’t always get to experience it, and the thought of it ‘whispering through footsteps’. Fantastic, and skin-tingling. I must remember to look and see if I’ve got any every now and then. Outstanding.
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Thanks a lot, Alli. Remember to check all your pockets, sometimes I forget where I stashed it.
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Like it – I’ll do that!
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How many, really…
I saw myself in the crowd, and it made me think. A brilliant and very necessary poem.
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Thank you very much for the kind words.
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Thank you for making me think and feel.
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You’re welcome.
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You are so good with words. I really like reading your work. ❤
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Hey, thanks, Wammy!
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You’re welcome
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WOW! Ken, this is beautiful! “But how many are too tired to stop and pick it up” this line got me! ❤
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Sorry, RIVER!! Not sure why Ken popped in my head?
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No problem, it happens.
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I think it was because I had read another piece right before yours and the author’s name was Ken!
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Thank you, Susi.
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Most excellent work
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Thank you!
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You are most welcome
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My favorite line from your weary, yet hopeful song: “To fertilize one broken, one forsaken, one wrong.”
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I really appreciate that, thank you.
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You have beautifully expressed the despair of many.
I am going to keep my words of hope and light flowing for there are so many in need.
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Thank you so much, Ali.
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I love this line…. “Yes, there’s hope, it’s all around us
But how many are too tired to stop and pick it up
Too weak to carry it, along with everything else”
Perfect. ☀️
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Thank you very much.
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hope staring in the face… seems like the end of d world :))
love the poem ✌️📚
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Thanks, Ray.
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Makes me feel some lost feeling I can’t describe. I particularly like;
“Flows through the gutters like paper boats / Made from yesterday’s news”
Awesome!
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Thank you very much, Nick.
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This is fucking brilliant.
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading.
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Hope some treat as a four letter word reserved for liturgy and politics. In every sense of the definition hope feeds the hungry, clothes the poor, shelters the homeless, and heals the sick. I should know – without hope my life would surely have been over long ago. As a castaway liberal in the US, our hope becomes even more important than ever because we have so much taken away from the aforementioned groups on a daily basis. Your verse gives voice to those who have little to hope for but must reach to pick it up where ever it can be found.
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Thank you very much for the comment and for reading.
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Profound writing. Beautiful.
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Thank you.
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“Nicotine stained fingers prod for meaning” … reminds me of an old friend. Thank you.
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You’re welcome. And thank you for reading!
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“Yes, there’s hope, it’s all around us” There’s always Hope. Great post this
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Thank you very much.
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Reblogged this on I Write Her and commented:
There’s such a raw feeling to this piece. River takes on a heavy subject and delivers its message so eloquently. It will leave you feeling heavy.
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Thanks, Susi.
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You’re welcome, River! 🙂
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River,
Wow, this spoke to my heart. The downtrodden those that reach for hope to find it has evaporated. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you very much, Ali.
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Fabulous imagery, River!
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Thank you, Chris!
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Just re-reading a year later and still wowed by this poem.
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Thank you, Melanie.
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