I’ll put it away now, for later, maybe
Crudely wrapped in blue smoke and
Pounding fists, squinting eyes, ripped pages
Thankful for the occasional flicker that drips
Like morphine at the back of my mind
Dead, before it hits the ground
No time for this world or your world
But I’ll try and remember to nod and smile
At the passing faces, greetings and salutations
But don’t shake my hand, I don’t want to get that close
They scare me, you see
In and out, over and under, doing what they do
For whatever reason they have to
I try not to judge, but man, it’s hard
I don’t understand them
And they don’t understand me
Not that they’d be bothered to try
Can’t blame them though, who wants to get stuck
Out in this rain, soaked to the bone, shivering
Damn, maybe I do understand, maybe
They’re just like me, busy packing things away
Turning a blind eye to those flickering thoughts
At the back of your mind, that cause you to question
Everything and nothing all at once
Everything and nothing…
Lovely read.
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Thanks, Bojana.
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Deeply laid ❣️❣️❣️
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Thank you!
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My pleasure 😊😊
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Great poem, River. Lots of meanings here.
They’re just like me, busy packing things away
Turning a blind eye to those flickering thoughts
At the back of your mind, that cause you to question
Everything and nothing all at once
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Thank you very much!
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Upon reading the first two lines, I knew it was going to be a good one…
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Thanks, Charlie.
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River, this is so good! I love the imagery and the battle of it. Wonderful!!
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Thank you very much, Susan.
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More than good!
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Thank you.
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As usual, 👏🏻👏🏻
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Thanks, Rita.
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My pleasure.
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That’s life… what to do with time…. brilliant River….
“But don’t shake my hand, I don’t want to get that close
They scare me, you see
In and out, over and under, doing what they do”
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Thanks a lot, Ivor.
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I’m on way of them too, River. And one of you also.
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Wow I wish WP had an edit button. I have no idea why autocorrect typed up a different message than what I wrote. *cries*
What I really meant to say is:
I am one of them too, River. And one of you also.
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Hey, it happens to the best of us. Thank you very much for reading.
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Loved this one River! More spontaneous ❤️
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Thank you very much!
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Our damn reality 🙂
Great 👍 piece!!
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Thanks, Ray!
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masterful play of words and loved the closing sentiment of everything and nothing all at once.
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Thank you for the kind words, Megha.
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My pleasure
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I love this:-)
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Thank you!
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Very well evoked
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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You’re welcome
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Hey River – would you mind if I advertise your publishing company on Instagram? I have bought one of your books and will post a review. Amazon isn’t allowing me to post it.
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Sure, we’d greatly appreciate that. Any mentions anywhere is a good thing. Thank you!
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My pleasure
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Just wow!
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Thank you so much!
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Yesss! Morphine at the back of my mind. Just loved it!
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Thank you very much!
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Your poetry is truly amazing and so beautiful 🌻💕 keep your the amazing work
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I appreciate that, thank you!
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Deep imagery here. Excellent writing.
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Thank you, Chris.
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You’re welcome.
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This is great!!
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Thank you!
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