I see now my failures
Your hand, it slips away
No longer seeking mine
Through times of darkness
Times of understanding
The times we shared
I never heard your cries
Beating your head against
My wall, day after day
Tears, dried and gone, before
I recognized your eyes, wandering
To places I’ve never been
Roads I’ve never followed
Hardened through indifference
As my failures surround and
Descend upon me, you offer
A wave, and I find comfort
In knowing at least, you still
Care enough to say goodbye
So touching and beautifully sad 🙏
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Beautifully penned, River. Gorgeous piece. ❤ ❤
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Thank you, Penny.
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Really, really liked this.
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Thank you very much!
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Touching. Glad to read your words today.
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Thank you, I appreciate that!
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Very poignantly versed
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Thank you.
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You are most welcome
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Your poem really touches the sorrows of a relationship going wrong. So deeply
sad. I love how your last three lines show how much you really care.
Beautifully written
miriam
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Thank you very much, Miriam.
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To pay attention to another this deeply, we all miss so much…I feel these words echoing throughout my body ♥️
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Thank you, Doree.
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What a perfect way to end.
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Thanks, Bojana.
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I like the rhythm of this poem!
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Thank you!
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The words, the flow everything about this poem is beautiful.
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Thank you for the kind words.
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You’re welcome River.
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So poignant.
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Thanks, Rita.
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One of your best, River!
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Thanks, Bruce.
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😢
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I felt this one. Take care.
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Thanks, Meg.
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“tears, dried and gone before I recognized your eyes…” So beautiful. This kind of seeing takes so much courage.
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Thank you, Susan.
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A relationship tale of truth and explained so well
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Thank you.
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Nice piece!
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Thank you.
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This is so beautiful.. so touching
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Thank you!
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So beautifully poignant. Wonderful poetry River.
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Thank you, Holly.
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You’re welcome, it’s my pleasure River.
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In the end of relationships I try to remember the beginning. It’s nostalgia and it seems better than it actually was unless I learned the lesson I was supposed to learn and then when I remember the lesson I remember why it ended…
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Wise words.
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😉 There is a song that says there is more room in a broken heart…💔 Hopefully more room to grow, to learn and to welcome the next person that crosses our path…love your poetry~
peace out River;-)
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Thank you.
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Amazing! 💕
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Thank you.
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Wonderful piece River… you worked that “bittersweet” contrast superbly… just lovely…
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I appreciate that, Monica. Thank you.
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River – Your poetry is so beautiful. Haunting. I am enjoying reading it immensely. -Jill
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Thank you, Jill!
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You are most welcome.
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This one struck an absolutely wonderful chord with me. I love it!! Thanks for sharing Dixon, I look forward to more!!
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Thank you very much, Ajay.
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a beatiful tale of love and loss…
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Thank you very much!
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This flows excellent, River. The line breaks are great.
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Thank you, Christopher.
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Aww, this hurts 😢 You’re too good!
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Thank you very much for reading!
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No, thank you because I now have super amazing stuffs to read. You make me want to write more as well ♥️
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That’s great. Keep writing!
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Sadness abounds. Feels real and raw. 💜
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Thank you for reading.
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Painfully beautiful and relatable. Thank you for your words ❤️
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Thank you for reading!
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