The char on the inside
Doesn’t go away
Tattooed and scarred
Although the bleeding
Stopped, years ago
The ache remains
I scrape at it
A little at a time
Sloughing off
The dead tissue
Taking much
Too much
Of the living with it
It’s down to bone
In a few places
But that’s necessary
The pain recedes
A little, gives way
To grieving
But it’s better
To have nothing
Left, eventually
Than what festers
Now, in its place
Wow…I love this. Thank you for sharing.
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You’re welcome. Thank you for reading.
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🙂
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Wonderful read!
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Thanks, Bojana.
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Subtle and sad. I love this!
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Thank you, Chris.
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Your words are mimicking my own thoughts today.
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Thanks for reading, M.
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My pleasure, River. 🙂
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Incredible! ❤
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Thank you, Penny.
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I feel this one
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Hopefully for not too long.
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Painful.
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Thanks for reading!
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Totally feel this. That imagery is perfect.
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Thanks, Tara.
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absolutely
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Damn right
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Going through something so similar.. there comes a time maybe our pain finally lets us go free.. with Mercury soon to hit Chiron this makes complete sense.
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Let’s hope so. Thanks for reading.
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Don’t we all have these kinds of iches? You captured them.
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Thank you.
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You are welcome, I really liked it. I hope you are well
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Great Poem River! I pictured a barbecue that was left too long. Real description with words in this poem. I felt with visual sensations, the pain!
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Thanks again for reading!
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Awesome 👍👍😎
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Thank you.
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Bumped into someone I knew a long time ago in a different situation and I felt exactly like this. Fantastic poem.
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Thank you, Suzanne.
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One of your best, really felt the pain here.
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Thank you, Leigha.
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You’re welcome.
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The scar remains forever reminding us of the pain we endured once. But we will not be stopped.. we will rise again..
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Thank you for reading.
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Nice consistent theme…
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I’ve become predictable in my old age…
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Without a consistent theme, it’s just a bunch of David Bowie lyrics…
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It’s better to be cold and unfeeling than to have the festering sores in the heart.
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I think you’re right.
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Encouraging and timely thanks for writing River.
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Thank you for reading!
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