Clandestine visions offered
Of an eternity swept under
The rug with fanciful assurance
Too late, in the end
To crawl out from under
The weight of the impulse
That clicks us forward
Toward inevitable suffering
And destruction of the true
Message printed on the heart
And flesh of affirmed salvation
Chewed and torn by the teeth
Of those who revel in the erasure
Of our calling to embrace the hand
That threatens to illuminate
The narrow path waiting
Beneath our feet
Nice body-imagery in the second part!
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Thanks.
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Lovely and poignant writing ❤ I always look forward to your poetry
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Thank you very much.
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Wow, River, fantastic. I’m not supposed to be blogging right now with just a week to go on my dissertation it’s meant to be head firmly down, but I couldn’t resist this one. Beautifully crafted poem, and well said.
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Thanks, Alli. Good luck with the dissertation.
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Very evocative.
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Thank you.
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A pleasure.
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Reminds of an amazing Book I like to read. I love it.
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Thanks, Snappy.
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👍
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Cool one! it seems it ends on a positive note tho :)) — with a discovery of a new path 🤓☝️
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Thanks, Ray!
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