Strange workings
These days
The inner
Twisted to outer
Painted with lies
They no longer smile
No need to hide
True intentions
For we are
Too afraid
To question
What comes next
Which line
You will be placed
Or which wall
Against you stand
But each
Ends with a bullet
Metaphorically
Or literally
No difference
In their eyes
from my latest poetry collection, Lost in the Hours. You can purchase here
Tru dat! x
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Thanks for reading, Nick.
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Harrowingly true.
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Thanks for coming by, Chel.
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I’m gonna compliment your title but it shouldn’t be assumed that I didn’t also like the poem…
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I assume nothing these days.
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1984 is only 36 years late.
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True. But it’s been a Brave New World for some time now.
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Yes, indeed.
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Agree 100 per cent.
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It’s on my TBR list. I assume you’d recommend it?!
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I feel it’s worth reading, yeah.
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Nice verse!
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Thanks, Jay.
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True enough.
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If we allow it, yes.
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Amen
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Well done
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Thank you.
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Wooow!!!👏
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Thank you.
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Beautiful blog
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Thank you.
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The relevance of this poem is striking.
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There are a whole lot of people that think they are “in the club” that are going to be shocked when they find out they are in fact not.
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That is a big truth!
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Oh, that was awesome!!!
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Thanks, Sam.
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Chilling, with such a dark ring of truth. Fantastic verse, River.
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Thank you, Alli.
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Love this!!!
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Thanks, Kevin.
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We shall overcome, dammit. Meanwhile, *sits down and snaps fingers repeatedly* …preach! ♥.
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Thanks, Niki. I hope you are doing well.
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*hugs* I am. I hope you are too, River. ♥.
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Love it!
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Thanks, Joseph.
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A very true and accurate poetic assessment of the way the world situation stands in this year of 2021 (in the definite footsteps of the year 2020).
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Thanks for reading.
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Hey! You were one of my first followers and I am very grateful.
I am hosting a little blog party to celebrate 3 years of blogging and 1000 followers, and you are invited! The post will be live tonight at 8PM IST.
Hope to see you there:)
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Thanks. Sorry I missed it, hope it went well. Take care.
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Powerful River. I feel it in my bones.
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Thank you very much for reading.
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My pleasure 😊
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My mood resonates with your words. Excellent.
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Thanks, Mia.
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Seems like there’s no escape either which way. So honest and powerful! 🙂
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Thank you very much for reading.
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