In deciding whether to maintain
Or shatter the monotony
I realize my underlying
Fixation with lines
A love affair, really
Tracing, connecting, standing in
Where would I be, for not
The linear encampment of routine
Under, over, around, through
Thin, thick, long, short
The straight and narrow
Illusions of opportunity
Shielded by the promise
Of a possible finish
Somewhere, eventually
Or a return to the start
A new beginning, the chance
To try again, maybe take
The time to step in between
The lines, crossing axis
Running parallel, or intersecting
With lines not so different
From my own
Love this! ❤️
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Thank you, Beck.
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A love that lasts.
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Yes, please.
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The ‘sad’ reality of existence!
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I’ll take sad over nothing. At least for a while.
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For some reason, I imagined your poem, being abt everyone’s reality right now. Perhaps I was wrong in my interpretation. Apologies.
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No need to apologize. Your interpretation is perfect.
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Miss your blog River
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I haven’t seen you in a while. I see you went private?
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Not yet. Soon though (I hope). Will contact if that happens.
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Superb poem River. The tangents of life and its intersecting connections. Makes you want to enter a black hole and explore an alternate reality. Tweeted and shared on facebook.
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Thank you very much, I appreciate that!
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I love how your words pace along like your interweaving lines.
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Thank you, Chel.
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Very beautiful indeed ❤
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Thank you!
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You’re very welcome
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Read it thrice. Couldn’t help but marvel at the ebb and flow of it. Absolutely brilliant!
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That’s kind of you to say, thank you.
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Excellent, River.
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Thanks, Eric.
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wow, nice lines! 😉
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Ha! You got it.
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Loved it
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Such keen observation.
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Thank you, Cassa.
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Journey of life across the lines. A unique thought. Nicely done.
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Thank you.
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I am probably totally off the mark, but I feel a sense of peace in this; perhaps it is my own longing for routine, for structure, to see the lines. Your poetry always makes me think, River, gives me perspective. Thank you.
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There is no mark, so you can’t be off it. I love your interpretation, Susan.
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Our lines lead us ever on. The best that we can hope for is that they cross, however briefly, with a sympathetic other.
Great poem.
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Thank you very much, Chris.
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This was a brilliant comparison♥️
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It flows so well that I was actually able to read it backwards and it was just as beautifully written!
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Thanks, that it interesting, I never thought to try that. Now I’ll be reading all my poems in reverse.
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I mean because the structure flows and echoes the theme:-)
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Brilliant, really!
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Thanks, David.
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A love affair with words = writing ✍️! Ah, awesomeness 💜💜👍
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Thanks, Ray!
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Well expressed 🍁
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Thank you.
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Beautifully written River, a very unique topic of order in a chaotic world.
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Thank you very much, Leigha.
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You’re most welcome.
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You are speaking my language. Nice.
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Thank you very much.
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I feel like this quite often, love this ❤️
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Thank you for reading!
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spider web of emotions – love this poem, eco
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Thank you, eco.
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I love the angles you see life from, River, and I love this linear picture of life. Superb poem.
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Thank you very much, Alli.
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I love your poem, River. It makes me think that love and hope are intertwined.
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Thanks, Judy.
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You’re welcome, River.
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I love it 👍
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Thank you.
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well done!
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Thank you.
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