if on your knees
you find yourself
bowing head, hands behind
your back, begging mercy
from the boots that march
trampling those left standing
who dare to not crumble
under the illusion of
their authority, remember
it is your obedience
that gives them the key
to the ivory tower
your bloody knees mean
nothing to them, it is
never enough, submission
breeds only the need
for more compliance
and you will live out
the rest of your days
groveling in the rubble
until they decide it’s
time to bury you
along with the rest
Fantastically said!
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Thank you.
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You are welcome.
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Yes, “The results of groveling and bowing are the same,” as I say. Really love this one, River – esp. like the opening! Hope you are well.
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Thank you, Samantha.
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A timely and urgent warning for sure, and powerfully expressed.
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Thanks, Mich.
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So true… we should always stand and fight for what’s right.
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Yes, I agree. Thanks, M.
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Lesson well learned, never forgotten.
Well done.
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Thank you, Bojana.
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Brilliantly put, River. A timely call to arms that we all need to heed – this should be the new anthem for the people.
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Thanks, Alli.
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Brilliant 😊
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Thanks, Rita.
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Blood and tears are necessary. Compliance is only a delay to a slower and regretful death.
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I agree.
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Nicely done
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Thank you.
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This is so true and powerful. Yes, weakness breeds the misconception of their strength and power. The fight must never extinguish. Wonderful writing. 🙂
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Thank you, Terveen.
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I understand the poem. But I can’t help but feel like this also applies to having children.
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See also, “marriage.”
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How fitting for life in general.
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in the totalitarian context the first trade off is free
once conditioned, the subjected must create a new reality in the mind….continually reconciling their prison as a desired end
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Prophetic and beautifully written.
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For the first time since it all began…I feel my own compliance looming. I feel there’s no way out. We are boxed in. ‘no. not me’, is becoming ‘…just take me. I’m tired of resisting’
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I know it’s not easy but I say resist as long as you can.
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Completely true.
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Thank you for reading.
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My pleasure.
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Powerful and Beautifully written, River. It makes me want to look up again, find my own power.
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Thank you, Susan.
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Hell yes.
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Thanks for reading, Meg.
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Perfectly, poetically and very timely… said.
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Thank you.
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Yes, timely sentiment, River. I would agree with the title – “This is Yours” and it’s theirs to own and take responsibility for. If it wouldn’t be for those kowtowing, we wouldn’t be where we are right now.
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Thanks, Susi.
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You’re welcome, River!
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Very True Words! Thanks for sharing your poetry with us River!
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Thank you very much for reading!
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Always a pleasure to read your stuff River!
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“Give ’em an inch and they’ll convert you to the metric system”
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You’d think at the very least they’d have enough decency to give you a reach around but no, nothing.
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I thought I’d finally make it through an entire week without seeing the term “reach around”…
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Holy crap!!! Very intense and we’ll put!!! ,
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Thank you, Milly.
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“it is your obedience
that gives them the key”
Excellent, timely message, I only with more people would see and understand.
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I have a lot to say about that, but I’ll keep it to myself. Thanks for reading.
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I’d love to hear your thoughts, if you’re ever up for sharing (privately).
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A strong ode indeed !
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Thank you.
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We write an idea section regularly each friday featuring all sorts of poems. Am sharing one that’s different fron this one. Hope you like it !
https://appamprawns.wordpress.com/2021/11/26/a-river-between-us/
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Thanks, I’ll check it out.
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