a split lip awakens and remembers
bare knuckle deep into the
wastewater of past haunts
evoking that fond, sick memory
of the fanciful martyr, someone
that someone accidentally
took notice of in a lifetime
of imagining the hero, though
always the victim, a pale reflection
an always almost but never quite
there, a myriad of self-fulfilling
self-indulged never self-reflecting
never enough yet somehow more than
tirelessly spitting into the wind as if
it’s really necessary to remind oneself
of the failures that dot the smug
lifeless determination that despite
the beatings knows nothing other
than to persist in spite of itself
I keep waiting for your quality to drop and it never seems to…
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So deep… So vivid… Excellent, Mr. Dixon.
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Thanks, Monica.
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Quality . . . pants . . . you never know.
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The difference is, I’ll willingly visualize your quality dropping…
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Mmm-hmm . . .
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These words… This… Speaks to me soul deep. Thank you for continually writing words that touch soul deep in the reading of them.
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Thank you, Trizia.
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I love this!
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Thank you, Susan.
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So excellent as usual !
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Thank you!
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excellent work !
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Thank you for reading.
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Aww, man. Been there! Really like this one, River.
Also, I love the opening imagery, and wonder if you could tie some of that back into the ending? Just my 2 cents!
Feel free to take it or leave it! Nice work!
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Thanks, Samantha. I see what you are saying. I always appreciate feedback.
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I wonder how can one break this loopy loop of existence and start to see some tiny wins in life..
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Good question.
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I love the stream of consciousness style here, the way it builds to a crescendo. Awesome!
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Thank you, Suzanne.
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This is amazing! I’m speechless. Glad I found this blog, following you 🙂
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Thank you very much.
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An exceptional poem River.
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Thank you, Gabriela.
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Always River. Am exceptional poem. Have a great Friday 🌸
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Thank you, you too.
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This is so profound. I love it so much. Well done
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Thank you. It’s nice to see you posting again.
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Aw. I’m glad that I’m drawn to writing again. I had such a block that I cannot explain but I made a lot of art. Now I do both. It’s very therapeutic
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I can feel these words…
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Thank you for reading, Tanya.
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Sorry for the late visit, River, I’m only able to drop into the blogsphere periodically at the moment. But I really felt this one, every word so beautifully crafted, as ever. I love ‘fond, sick memory of the fanciful martyr’. Wonderful verse.
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Better late than never. Thank you, Alli.
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Yes, indeed. Apologies, I’m not in the blogsphere much at the moment owing to too much going on, but I’ll always catch up if I’ve missed out on your mesmerising verse.
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I appreciate that. I’ve been spending less time in the blogging word myself. Honestly, I’m getting a bit tired of it all.
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Oh no, sorry to hear that, River. Blogging is quite a commitment though, and sometimes life gets in the way. So I understand how you feel – I’ve been there too a few times. But I must say your amazing verse brings a welcome dose of class and genius to the blogsphere.
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Thanks, Alli.
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Almost always …but never quite:) good one ☝️ says everything about our life & humanity 😅
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Thanks, Ray. Nice to see you.
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