A brief glimpse of evening
Left me on azure drifts, graying
Carrying away this thought, that
And the other, in long sighs
It’s the momentary reprieve
We cling to, work for
Dream of, in wisps of hope
That bounce around like
Dancing treetops in anticipation
Of the coming storm that somehow
Maintains beauty in the violence
Of all its perfect, destructive force
Creating life anew from the
Ashes, remains of the old
It seems as if nothing is wasted
Or without purpose, a grand design
But not us, no, we are ugly, fallen
In ways we cannot see, or know
And we feign satisfaction as it all
Floats away on another long exhale
Before we are snuffed out by one thing
Or this, maybe that, perhaps another
That is really good. I loved it! ❤
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Thank you, Carol Anne.
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We do deceive ourselves, don’t we? Love it. 🙂
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Sure do. Thank you for reading.
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Mankind fucked up for sure!
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Yup.
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Love this
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Thank you.
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Fabulous ❤️
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Thanks, Rita.
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My pleasure 😊
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That’s a coincidence: I just found one of your poetry books in my living room.
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Hmm, why do I get the feeling that “living room” is code for fire place?
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If it is all by Grand Design, then surely we are too dim witted to understand. Kinda humbling. Nice poem.
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Yeah. You know, I think that even if it was a not-so-grand design, we’d probably still be too dim to understand.
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I feel this. Sometimes it’s like we’re a blip in eternity. The “time” inside this blip is precious nevertheless. ∞
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I agree.
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Powerful write River.
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Thank you.
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Darkly beautiful.
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Thank you, Dawn.
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Deep!
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Thank you, Sharon.
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It’s how I feel these days
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I hate to be a pessimist, but I think we ain’t seen nothin’ yet.
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I know. And it’s tough not to be a pessimist
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I found myself reading this over and over trying to soak in every line, like standing before a painting of pastels and trying to decide which color I loved the most.
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Thank you, Phyllis. I hope you are doing well.
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I always think of the children at St. Jude’s when I’m asked that question because I’ve lived 70 years and had so many wonderful and not so wonderful experiences. If I pass away tomorrow, that’s okay. I know they will not all make it, but they make me want to love each day as if it were my last.
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Beautiful. I love the way it circles around from the beginning to the end with this, that, another–kind of haunting.
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Thank you, Suzanne.
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Yes, it feels like we are insignificant in the vastness of significance – why are we here, what purpose is it all, is this there all there is? Very thought-provoking, River!
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Thank you, Susi.
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You’re welcome, River! 🙂
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Wow🤍
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Thank you for reading.
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You’re welcome😊
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Loved this.😍
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Thank you!
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Your latest poems speak to the temporary beauty and ugliness of life, like a flower when it blooms, but after it has blossomed, then what? Honest poems! Existential, and good.
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Thanks a lot, I appreciate that.
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Always good to read your poems River, well done!
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Thanks, Leigha. Nice to see you.
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There is much power in the rawness of nature and beauty as well. We on the other are often a destructive force. Beautifully written. ❤️
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Thank you!
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