there’s a strangeness
to these days that i
can’t quite put a finger on
the persistent tapping
in the back of my mind
that once acknowledged
reverberates throughout
freezing limbs, heart
palpitations, blurred vision
and dry mouth, a coming
something uncomfortable
from the edges, foreign
this desire to wrap
hands around the throat
of these days, to feel
the cartilage give way
beneath quaking thumbs
thick fingers digging
into the throat, tearing
away the muscle and tendon
and to look into the eyes
of these days, and watch
the life drain, in suffering
and regret, crying out
for mercy and forgiveness
preying on my empathy
as that too, puddles around
my feet, crimson and black
in its unforgiving release
there’s no mercy left in me
for these days, only rage
the opening of a door
that i fear can never
be closed again
There is indeed a strangeness to these days.
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For sure. Thanks for reading.
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this may be my new favorite. the bone deep tired just resonates. well penned, my friend.
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Thank you. I wish I was insightful enough to see how long (or short) the fuse is. But I’m insightful enough to understand that it’s burning.
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the clarity at the end of the rope
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Your poem is very strong and heartfelt. The unreality we all feel, fear and anxiety.
It is all there. – and then more.
Thar door can be closed again.
miriam
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Thank you very much, Miriam.
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Superbly evoked poem
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Thank you very much.
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You’re welcome
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Yes. These days are begging to be dispatched with morbid alacrity.
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Running out of cheeks to turn.
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Pick up some beef cheeks at the carneceria.
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I have enough people mad at me, don’t need the vegans coming after me too.
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So, like… get some ‘beyond’ cheeks from the imaginarium. 🙂
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Ha!
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A poem for 2020, and a brilliant one. This is a time wrought with raw emotion, and you’ve managed to articulate the way so many of us feel in your usual searingly perceptive way. A new favourite for me too.
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Thank you very much, Alli. A lot of anger out there.
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The lines about your empathy puddling at your feet were amazing. So evocative.
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Thank you very much, Sam.
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Wringing 2020 in the throat! Articulate murder of these and more to come
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Yeah, more to come. Thanks for reading.
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Absolutely brilliant. Perfectly penned and one that I think a lot of us are feeling. Completely relatable… at least for me.
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Thanks, Tara.
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Yes.
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Yes.
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Excellent piece. I can really relate, especially to the beginning, as I keep waking up in the middle of the night, my first thought “Something is wrong”. But I still haven’t figured out what it is.
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I can definitely relate to disrupted sleep.
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Penned in excellence River… Real to the touch, for many can relate, including myself…
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Thank you very much for reading.
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Well done and well-ended. But, I fear your family needs a panic room that you don’t have access to…
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They have nothing to fear. When it gets to that point, I’m heading straight to your place.
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Fortunately, I have a panic room… but I’m not allowed inside…
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For good reason, I’m sure. Although I took you for someone who probably has a panic bus.
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Wow! What a great poem to sum up the hate for this year… such strong imagery. Well done River!
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Thank you, Leigha.
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You’re welcome.
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You are definitely not alone. We live in a time of madness.
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Heartbreaking and beautiful.
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Thank you, Laura.
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A dark way to look at New Year’s, I think!
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New Years or any given Thursday.
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Fantastic! I think we’re all feeling the need to grab these times by the throat and squeeze but you’ve put it into some fine words for us. Thank you River!
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You’re welcome. Thank you very much for reading.
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Beautiful writing River
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Thank you, Holly.
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You’re very welcome
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Feeling that strangulation, being cut off from everything; sometimes, we can just let go
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That’s true. I think sometimes we forget that we have the power to let go.
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funny how rage feels and overtakes, excellent description.
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Thanks, Jay.
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I find it difficult to put into words the last two years. This is so good. I hope rage turns to peace with the mercy of time.
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Thank you for reading.
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You have an extraordinary gift, River. I know those feelings but never had words to express them. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you very much!
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Awesome poem. I could too easily relate.
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Thanks, Priscilla.
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Poignant!
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Thank you.
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You’ve really captured the way I’ve been feeling too but didn’t know how to articulate. This piece is so powerful!
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Thank you, Suzanne.
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Brutally honest and powerful!
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Thanks for reading, Dawn.
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I often cry when I attach to a piece of work, a particular string of heartfelt words. I feel I am looking into the mind of a beautiful soul. I feel shy as I read your work, rather your art, and as if I am unentitled.
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Thank you very much for reading and for the thoughtful comment.
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Sad and real.. 😊
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Thank you for reading.
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Welcome 😊
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Gah! This is perfect!
And I love the picture.
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Thank you.
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I’m thinking of printing it off for my study wall. I hope that’s okay?
Blessings on your holiday season River
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Of course, I’d be honored. And all blessings to you, too.
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